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古有神农尝百草,今有书痴读灵舟。后宫种马虐文。前期种马,后期虐。一个NT主角让外国书友们飘飘欲仙,毒发而亡

Spirit Vessel

灵舟



Spirit Vessel takes place in a mysterious world. There are cultivators rebelling against the heavens and beautiful elegant women with endless grace.

这是一个浩瀚的奇异世界,有与天搏命的修行者,婀娜多姿的美妙女子,

There are peerless experts reincarnating into the world and formidable ancient beasts.

穿越寰宇的古强人,还有凶猛的古兽,

Beneath the earth is the Yellow Springs; above the heavens many saintly palaces float. And there are the seven spirit vessels.

泥土下的黄泉,天空中的宫殿。 还有七只古老的灵舟。

外国网友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu
 
Smhxd
 
Don't want to flame the translater OR the author cause this might be the type of Novels they like but this might be just not for me I guess cause I really cringed at MC's character and NO I didn't expect some God because its a reincarnation Novel, neither did I expect someone with some kind of Emperor's 'aura' but MC is behaving like a 10 year old and I really dislike such Novels.

不想激怒翻译或作者,因为这是他们喜欢的小说,但肯定不包括我,这本小说的主角让我尴尬不已。因为这是一本转世小说。没想到有神,也没想到会种马后宫,主角的行为就像是一个十岁大的孩子,真的很讨厌这种小说。

Queen of Sheba 
 
You know when the author creates this exceptional plot twist, and centres the whole story around this one event?
Inconsistent protagonist, whom more often then not doesn't seem to follow established characterisation at all. What will it be mistrust, or lust? What will it be, fame, or infamy? For God's sake author, there's something called characterisation, if a protagonist changes radically there NEEDS TO BE A REASON.

作者什么时候有剧情转折?
反复无常的主角,通常情况下,这些人根本不按设定来。是猜疑,还是贪欲?是名誉,还是羞辱?作者啊!
有一种叫做性格塑造的东西,如果主角发生了根本性变化,那就需要有一个理由来说明。

MonkeDanana
 
A novel for masochists. You might like it if you like getting tortured, feeling pain, or you like tragedy 

受虐狂小说。如果你喜欢被折磨,感受痛苦,或者喜欢悲剧,你可能会喜欢

ZhypherMU
 
Decided to drop this because of:
MC is acting like a fcking child. Like how he hated the beauty that looks like the one he fell in love with and wanted to take revenge. I mean come on HE is said to be a peerless master. Can't he even conceal his emotion???
And what the fck is with him being surprised every chapter? Does he still have a dignity of a supreme existence in the mortal world? Even though he reached the 'APEX' he gets amazed to those small time elders?
In total really gets me down as the story has many contradictions to what it says about the MC. A peerless expert who gets tempted for treasures that is only worth so-so. I thought he would nonchalantly glance at them because he WAS once a top existence. And a "PHOENIX" nonetheless

决定弃书:
主角就像一个小屁孩样。就像他对美女的爱和复仇。我的意思是,别这样,主角是一位无与伦比的大师。难道就不能掩饰下自己的情绪吗?
为什么每章他都要感到惊讶?如果主角在凡人世界里是至高无上的存在,即使有人达到了“顶点”,主角会对那些年幼的长者感到惊讶吗?
总的来说,我很失望,这个故事与主角有很多矛盾之处。一个无以伦比的大师,被诱惑去寻找那些可怜的宝藏。我以为主角会漫不经心的看他们一眼,因为他曾经是一个顶级人物。还特么是一只“凤凰”啊!

renecop545 
 
This story really is very poorly written. The opening 15 chapters or so were decent, which is what kept me reading until ch 100, but the story really starts to degrade from ch 15 onwards until it becomes a steaming pile of hot shit.
There's no continuity between chapters, characters have wild mood swings and act completely opposite to their established characterizations from one chapter to the next, and plot lines are introduced and dropped wily nily,Sorry Bao, but this novel is legitly terrible

这个故事糟透了。开头的15章还不错,一直读到第100章,从第15章开始,故事就慢慢变了,变成一堆狗屎。
章节之间没有连续性,人物情绪波动剧烈,从这一章到下一章的角色行为完全相反,情节莫名其妙的引入或删除,这部小说非常糟糕!

Dsb

The author of this novel must have some very deep issues and is clearly a sexual deviant. The novel is tr*sh, the author is tr*sh and anybody that enjoys reading this is also tr*sh. Sorry, not sorry 

这部小说的作者显然是一个变态。小说是垃圾,作者也是垃圾,任何这本书的人也是垃圾

Viole22 
 
I have to say that i've never been this angry from reading a story before. If you can get past ch60-62 without spurting blood from anger then you can read this. Otherwise I dont recommend it. 

我从来没有因为看小说生气过。这本例外。如果你读到62章还能看的下去,那么你可以读。否则我不推荐。

silvanatri
 
I read up to 240 before giving up. Very frustrating story. Most stories is like a long road with the occasional curves in them but this sh*t is more like a maze. Things go from left to right and is very jaring.

读到240章我就放弃了。这是令人懊恼的故事。大多数故事像一条长长的路,偶尔有弯道,但这故事更像是一个迷宫。杂乱无序,令人不安。

Seregosa 
 
Well, you have the other reviews, we know how much of a moron the MC is. 
The things about backstabbing and being mistreated by girls makes me wonder if the author is a masochist or if he has had personal experiences regarding being dumped all the time, something which wouldn't surprise me. Clearly, something is going on that makes him write such cringey sh*t.

好吧,我们知道主角是多么的愚蠢。
背后捅刀子和被女孩虐待,让我怀疑作者是否有受虐狂点倾向,或者他有被甩的经历。很明显,是什么导致他写小说写的如此卑鄙。

Shtirliz
 
I don't recommend this novel.
Here we have hundreds yo old top-notch semi-god cultivator who was reincarnated in the body of 15 yo with all of his knowledge and memories. But instead of protagonist with wisdom and knowledge of old here we have brainless imbecile. 
 And terrible level of protagonist actions is just a mirror of terrible level of author writing abilities. In one chapter author could write one things and ten chapters later - totally different. Story is drowning in random skills and powers which absolutely random and without system. Story is drowning in absolutely terrible actions and idiotic situations. This novel is just plain terrible

我不推荐这本小说。
在这里,我们的顶级半神修炼者,带着知识和记忆转世到了15岁的身体里。但这本书的主角根本没有智慧,完全是一个愚蠢的傻瓜。
主角糟糕的行为恰恰反映了作者糟糕的写作水平。在这一章中,作者可以写一件事,下一章——完全不同。故事发展很随机,随即的技能和随即的力量,没有系统。可怕和愚蠢的行为让这小说糟透了!

Dsatan
 
Well MC was a Phoenix sect Patriarch from Phoenix race
And spending most his time in deep mountain to cultivation, so he being curious to human cities are normal, and it is said in earlier chapters Phoenix could live for 99.000 years so 1.000 years are still young for MC, and his soul fuse with 14-15 yo soul
Well this is a novel not a fcking drama scrip

主角是凤凰族族长
他大部分时间在深山修炼,所以他对人类的好奇是正常的,在前面的章节中说凤凰可以活99.000年,所以1000年对于主角来说还是年轻人,他的灵魂与14-15岁的灵魂融合
这是小说,不是电视剧


TheGamingNerd 
 
Pretty interesting and stuff at the start but then it started becoming worst and worst the cultivation system/items he is suppose to be a phoenix with thousand years knowledge but he doesn't know a lot of things in the novel which makes me wonder is he pretending to be s*upid or is he really s*upid ? 

开始很有趣,后来变得越来越糟糕。他是一只拥有千年知识的凤凰,但他对小说中很多东西都不了解,我想知道他是在假装还是真的笨?

Hyouou
 
So I started this novel because in the synopsis it was written: "Even if I die I will still love" or something similar.

我试着写小说,在故事大纲中写着:“即使我死了,我仍然会爱你”类似的东西。

cutterline 
 
I'd say this one is actually kinda refreshing to read. The MC is borderline crazy and has idiotic tendency which makes you wonder if he really had lived for 1000 years and become patriarch 

说这本书设定很不错。主角很疯狂,有白痴的倾向。这让你怀疑主角是否活了1000年还成为了族长

deathcoy
 
To be honest I don't know what to say about this novel.
It is highly rated among the native chinese readers so there's got to be something to the novel but I just can't see it, for now. The writing is littered with jarring flaws, inconsistencies & plot holes, incoherent plot progression, character contradictions and a lot of repetitiveness.
Decided to drop this.

老实说,我不知道对这本书说些什么。
这本小说在中国本土评价很高,所以这本书肯定有些东西,但我现在还看不到。这篇文章充满了缺陷、情节漏洞、不连贯的剧情、人物矛盾和大量重复。
我决定放弃

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