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史上最强师兄-不同与其他废柴逆袭流开局的仙侠作品,外网评论这部作品设定上是反讽,但随着时间的推移沦为平庸之作

History’s Strongest Senior Brother

史上最强师兄



It was Yan Zhaoge’s first time transmigrated into another world. He landed in a martial warrior civilization that was at the peak of prosperity. He ended up in the Divine Palace’s library, which collected and preserved the classics of the entire world from all fields of knowledge. However, a world-class calamity struck soon after, and even the Divine Palace was destroyed.

燕赵歌第一次穿越,穿到了武道文明繁盛至极的异世界,一头撞进包罗万象,遍收天下经典的神宫藏书楼里,但随后便是一场天地大劫,连神宫也破灭了。

Yan Zhaoge’s soul once again transmigrated into another world. The twist was he arrived in the same world, except countless years have passed.

接下来居然第二次穿越,灵魂来到了同一个世界,不知多少年后的时代。

With his brain full of rare books and classics from the era of peak prosperity, Yan Zhaoge’s second transmigration to the present era was like a gamer who was used to playing hell mode suddenly finding himself playing the game on easy mode.

装了一脑子神宫秘籍宝典的燕赵歌,二次穿越到当前的时代,简直就如同一个人玩惯了地狱模式之后,突然被丢去玩简单模式。

That was just way too awesome.

简直不要太爽!

But before that, he would need to fix a problem.

不过在此之前,他先要解决一个问题。

“I’m not the main character? In fact, I’m actually the main character’s love rival and the antagonistic Mr. Perfect senior brother?”

“我不是主角?而是跟主角争妹子的反派高富帅师兄?”

“This script is wrong!”

“这剧本不对啊!”
 
外国网友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

Slashs 
 
This is an exemple of a novel that starts great but forgets very fast what's special about it and ends up as a generic LN.

这本小说开头很棒,但很快随风逐流,变成了一本普通小说。  

lingarko 
 
Great you are the best. Making a mockery of god knows all the xianxia, wuxia novels which follow the same script.

太好了,你是最棒的。很多仙侠、武侠小说剧情大致都是一样的。

randomperson
 
After reading all of the current chapters, I want to say something.
Like the description says, the MC is the senior brother which if he was in a traditional xianxia novel, he would be the antagonist. Like in HN1F, we once again see xianxia main character tropes, like once tr*sh, but obtained a priceless treasure and becomes a genius; taking the body of an insignificant noble/royalty child and beats up all the people that once belittled the body's previous owner; and going back to the past with the knowledge of the future; but this time, all of them are Yanzhaoge's enemy

读完所有的章节,我想说点什么。
根据标题主角是师兄,如果他在传统的仙侠小说里,他就是主角的对手。我们拿传统仙侠的主角来说,比如主角之前是个渣渣,获得无价之宝成为天才;穿越到某个无足轻重的贵族身体里,打脸轻视他的人;或者未来重生到过去;但这次,他们都是燕赵歌的敌人

Novelupdatesaccount1
 
This story started out pretty funny but it quickly turned into a fairly generic battle story with a very generic battle system pretty quickly. New characters are introduced all the time and forgotten fairly quickly, everything remains fairly shallow, the MC makes cunning plans, but the author hides them from the reader so the MC appears to just keep making s*upid decisions until the Asspull "this was all according to my secret plan" card is used.

故事一开始很有趣,但很快就变成了平庸之作,通常与那些有系统作品一样。出场角色很快,但很快又被遗忘,所有的事都很肤浅,主角制定了巧妙的计划,但作者把它们都隐藏了起来,主角不断做着愚蠢的决定,直到最后“一切都是根据我的计划秘密进行”的混账话。
  
Lunnear 
 
Okay, so he wanted to avoid being the last boss and also avoid becoming the main character. That's good. Is understandable. He's a prince but didn't want to be too arrogant, that is another plus. 
The only thing that I don't know is will he turn corrupted in the end? Or will he continue to be the strongest Senior Brother.

好吧,他不想成为boss,也不想成为主角。可以理解成他是一个王子,不想太傲慢,这是一个加分项。
我唯一不理解的是:主角最终会堕落吗?还是会继续成为最强师兄。

hexfirwe 
 
You would guess that this novel would be a parody. I dont know if the author intended it to be one but it isnt. The main character follows all the common tropes without even a hint of parodying them.

你也许会猜这本小说是模仿的。我不知道作者是否打算这样做,但事实并非如此。主角虽遵循了所有通用套路,没有模仿的意思。

Jeebus 
 
Reading this web novel is like watching a your best friend sink into quicksand and die, in slow-motion. It slowly sinks into a muck of mediocrity, finally devolving into what it originally parodied.

阅读这本小说就像看着你最好的朋友慢慢沉入流沙中死去。它陷入平庸的泥潭,最后沦为一部平庸之作。

GabeZhul
 
Not bad. An enjoyable read, though it very quickly falls prey of the same tropes it sets out to satirize.
The protagonist is supposed to be the stereotypical "arrogant young master" the "main character" was supposed to go up against? Sounds like a nice subversion, until you realize the protagonist also faces two such "arrogant young masters" in just the first couple of chapters.

不错。是一本令人愉快的小说,尽管它很快沦为讽刺的牺牲品。
主角是一个“傲慢的少爷”,按照剧情“主角”应该与他对抗?听起来像是一个颠覆的设定,直到主角也面临着同样的问题。

Hisagi 
 
The main character, Yan Zhaoge, is a godlike prodigy. He wins every fight, there is no tension whatsoever.
Whatever he does, he does it perfectly, and gets some additional benefit along the way - ancient legacy, legendary artifact,... you name it. Unsurprisingly, his Mary Sue halo extends to those around him, and damnation awaits anyone with competing interest.

主角燕赵歌是个天才。他无压力的赢得了每一场战斗。
无论他做什么,都做的完美,并在过程中获得了额外的好处——古老遗产,传奇武器,不出所料,他的主角光环延伸了,任何与他竞争的人都受到了诅咒。

Queen of Sheba
 
Fairly good. This story has several positive qualities. The protagonist is excellent, and his conduct is without question. The conflicts are also designed as to leave the audience without an opportunity to take a deep calming breath.

还行。这个故事有几个优点。主角很优秀,他的举止没有任何问题。很多战斗场面很刺激,让观众大气都不敢喘。

NovelsJapan 
 
Good story with a nice twist to the normal xianxia novels, If you ever read xianxia before then you can understand the story more and gets the comedy behind it. Everyone should definitely read it.

好故事,与一般的仙侠小说相比有一个转折点,如果你读过很多仙侠小说,那么你就可以更了解这个故事背后的喜剧。每个人都应该读一读。

Ardavix 
 
If you read the description and the comments and thought to yourself that this was going to be a satirical comedy novel along the lines of My Disciple Died Yet Again then I'm afraid that you'll be disappointed. Simply put this is a Xuanhuan; that's it. If you know the genre then you've read this novel before. The first few chapters seem to be in the satirical comedy spirit; however, it very very quickly becomes just another Xuanhuan.

如果你读了内容简介和评论,心里猜测这是一部讽刺喜剧小说,我恐怕你会失望的。简单地说,这是一个玄幻;如果你以前读过类似的小说可以深刻理解。前几章是在讽刺玄幻;然而,它摇身一变,变成了另一个玄幻故事。

pocketbear
 
I have read my share of wuxia and xianxia, and have become oversaturated with the auctions and Mt Tai and arrogant young masters and senseless killing. This novel is like a breath of fresh air, in a different way than History's Strongest Founder is. 

我读过很多武侠和仙侠的作品,对拍卖会和后宫、傲慢少爷和杀戮已经厌倦。这部小说就像一股新鲜空气,不同与普通的网络小说。

clowred 
 
If I were to rate the first ten chapters, not even five stars would have been enough. The fresh comedy and protagonist made me feel a sense of attachment towards the author who, in my opinion, was at the time even better than all the other xianxia author by a few levels.

如果给前十章打分,绝对是五星以上。这部喜剧的主角,让我对这位作家产生了一种依恋感,在我看来,这位作家比其他仙侠作品好上几个层次。

Soma 
 
Good xianxia story, and it made people addicted, too bad the update is too slow. Oh, my heart is in pain.

很好仙侠的故事,它让人沉迷其中,可惜更新太慢。哦,我的心在痛。

Davr
 
It started out pretty good
But as the story progressed, the side character plot became more and more annoying.
Problems the main character could have dealt with immediately, were dragged out for many chapters.

一开始还不错
随着故事的发展,情节变得越来越烦人。
主角本来可以马上处理的问题,被拖了好几章。

beddedOtaku 
 
First things first: don't let that summary fool you, this novel isn't much different than your standard xianxia fair. 

别让那个简介骗了你,这本小说和其他仙侠没什么区别。

dweenator
 
Let me preface by saying that it has been quite a long time since I have read this novel.
Which is pretty understandable since this novel has been on hiatus/dropped and picked up twice.
And since it has been recently picked up again, i'll give out my review just to help it gain new readers.

声明,我已经很久没有读这本小说了。
这可以理解的,因为这部小说已经停刊两次。
它最近又被收录了,于是我发表我的评论,来帮助它获得新读者。

ImperfectMemes
 
This author is great. While the background was initially lacking, that's exactly how all xianxia novels are. It's extremely entertaining and I hope that someone picks up the novel soon.

很棒。虽然缺乏背景,但所有仙侠小说都是这样。这部小说很有趣,希望有人会读到。

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