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Godly Model Creator

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The arrival of origin ability era. Many berserk beasts spawned. Humans with superpowers blooming like mushrooms.

源能降临,凶兽纵横,超能力丛生。

Su Hao is just an ordinary 3rd year high school student who had mastered a lowly grade origin ability named“Model analysis”.

苏浩只是一名掌握了低级源能"模型分析"的普通高三学生,

However, when he was creating a character model in his mind by analyzing the opposing side’s ability, a crazy idea echoed in his mind. What would happen if he creates a model of the entire world?

然而,当他在脑海中建立出人物模型,分析出对方能力之后,一股狂热的念头在脑海中回荡,如果他建立出整个世界的模型,会怎样?

This would imply that he… would be like a God, controlling the world!
 
这是否意味着,他可以——掌控世界!

外国网友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

q00u
 
Probably a 3.5, but there aren't half-stars here.
I previously read -90°'s The Strongest Gene, and this is of similar quality. Some interesting ideas, some humor, not the worst writing. But characters are introduced that are later mostly forgotten about.
There are plenty of problems with the story (or possibly the translation). Plot-holes and mistaken details, but some of them might be chalked up to errors in the translation. There are plenty of other translation mistakes (wrong words or just plain grammatical errors). For example, near the end someone translating seems to think "stunning" and "gorgeous" are 100% interchangeable. So expect to hear about someone's "gorgeous defeat" or "gorgeous turnabout" or "gorgeous outcome".

评分可能3.5分,也可能是3分。
我以前读过作者的《最强的基因》,跟这本小说类似。它有一些很有趣的想法,有幽默感,这不是作者最糟的作品。但最后这些角色很快被遗之脑后。
这个故事或翻译很有问题。有很多细节,情节方面的漏洞和错误,其中有可能是翻译造成的。错误的单词或语法错误。例如,接近结尾时,翻译似乎认为“震惊”和“华丽”的意思是一样的。所以我们看到一些错误句子:“华丽的失败”或“华丽的转变”或“华丽的结局”。

DeadOpossum 
 
A boy is being bullied and was told to not come close to a girl, suddenly he gets superpowers...
How childish the author can be? What's with the abrupt and s*upid cliche start? How about creativity? I understand that on a bad day the author can write shit, but start a novel right like that? What quality to expect later?
Dropped.

一个男孩被人欺负的原因是,叫他不要靠近某个女孩,然后他觉醒了
这是多么幼稚?这个老掉牙的套路是怎么开始的?毫无创新,可以预见,之后这种狗屎情节也会更多。这种质量的小说有什么可看到?

弃书

Okabe_rintarou
 
In fact I haven't even read 50 chapters.
And the author is ret*rded to think that people would just think that the MC was 'hiding' his abilities if he suddenly shows 100x improvement even if it's just before a test.
I really can't find anything 'original' about this story.
I might try and finish it later if I have nothing else to read. But right now reading this feels like a punishment game

50章我都没读完。
很难想象,主角在考试之前,突然表现出100倍的进步,而人们都认为他“隐藏”了自己的能力。
这个故事我真的找不到任何“原创”的东西。
如果我没书荒,我是不会看到。读这本小说,就像在玩惩罚游戏一样

cloud28884
 
The novel tells about Su Hao journey from weak w/ low grade origin ability talent until he become the strongest.
The first 400 chapter still quite OK for me, but the story after the beast tide is kinda going down hill (with increasing loophole).
But, it's still OK if you just wanna enjoy a complete story w/ happy end setting

小说讲述了苏浩由弱变强,成为强者的故事。
对我来说,前400章很好,之后就不行了,剧情漏洞越来越大
如果你想快乐的享受一个完整的故事,你可以试着读一读

xinan 
 
The novel starts off good with many unpredictability, which is refreshing, but over time it started to become repetitive with thicker plot armor. Towards the end, I have to drag myself to finish it.

开头不错,有很多不可预测的情节,让人耳目一新。但随着时间的推移,情节开始变的重复冗长。接近结尾时,我不得不逼自己看完

fangyuan 
 
Decided to drop it because I felt that reading it became a chore. I don't mind slow-paced novels but as mentioned by other reviewers, the author repeats contents and employs filler chapters way too much. 

决定放弃,原因是越读越乏味。我不介意慢节奏,正如其他评论所说,作者重复了太多的内容,水了太多的字数。

yusufyy
 
The story itself is good. But the problem is that the author is extremely s*upid and very forgetful. Su Hao has so many techniques that he could use to change the battle easily or get clues and such with just some techniques.  Hopes the author fixes his brain

故事本身是好的。但问题是,作者是个保守的人,而且非常健忘。苏浩有很多技巧,他本可以轻松战斗,获得线索。希望作者能提高主角的智商

MeAndMeOnly
 
The MC is so st*pid. He said that he need to hide his cheat or whatever is it and then days later on he show off his talent. For that moment I know he's really d*mb st*pid child.
Did he really think no one gonna know his super high speed talent? Unless his enemies have low IQ then his safe.

主角太蠢了。明明自己都说要隐藏幕后,然后几天过去,他就开始炫耀天赋。那一刻我知道他真的是傻子。
主角认为没人知道他的天赋吗?除了强行降智,没人能保证他的安全

Nippy 
 
Li Xin had me in tears. Overall decent show, theres some issues with his powers that people say but its understandable and not as annoying as others 

李信让我哭了。总的来说,他的能力有一些问题,但可以理解,不像其他人说的那么烦人

Unbreak
 
A good overall idea. Extremely bad execution.
The author keeps going back on what he said and changing stuff, like the goal for entering the top university, from 10 to 18 points.

很好的故事,但写作不行。
作者不断重复的水数字,比如进入顶尖大学,10分的内容提高到18分。

shady8x 
 
This is a really good cultivation story with some ability steal elements and a fairly smart MC. The MC does kill his enemies, but is at times far too soft, which causes him to fail at times. But he learns from his failures and improves.

精彩的修真故事,偷窃能力也不错,这是个聪明的主角。他杀死了很多敌人,有时因过于软弱,导致任务失败。但他能从失败中吸取教训,实力更进一步。

omgitsaray 
 
This could have been so much better. It's set in a futuristic world and the cultivation of Espers was a wonderful addition in the already saturated "spiritual energy" market of novels.
Unfortunately, just like others have mentioned, the translation/editing is not that good so that descriptions and even storyline gets confusing.

这本小说本来可以更好。故事发生在一个未来世界,对精神超能力方面小说有一个极好的补充。
不幸的是,如其他人所说,翻译不是很好,情节很混乱。

ziki 
 
There are parts of the story that I liked but the author keeps on forgetting what he wrote and keeps on coming up with more and more BS as the story goes on.

有些情节我很喜欢,但作者经常忘记他写的东西,随着故事的展开,废话越来越多。

crustyturtle
 
Putting it on hold for now, the plot isn't that original but it's what made me try out this novel in the first place. I like how this takes place in a High school/university setting but the translation isn't great and the story so far isn't that good for me to continue.

我尝试了下,暂时放弃。小说情节有很多老套的情节,并没有多少创新。我喜欢主角高中或大学的生活,但翻译不太好,现在已经影响到我继续读下去的兴致了。

raizel362 
 
I was skeptical because of ow reviews. But after I started reading I became hooked. I think story is good. The main thing I love is aboubt MC's power, which is unique. 

我很怀疑这些评论的真实性。当开始阅读后,我上瘾了。这个故事很不错。我最喜欢强力无敌的主角。

Bakaleaf 
 
It's a good novel if you take away the part of the author's obsession on Tournament's!

如果你过滤掉校园比试的话,你会发现这本小说还是很不错滴

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