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外国人看网文系列二 召唤万岁 主角岳阳前世是个宅男,穿越龙腾大陆后变得荒诞无比,外国书友热议

Long Live Summons!

召唤万岁



The Soaring Dragon Continent is a world of summons, you can only become strong if you become a summoner! Yue Yang, an average high school boy, was suddenly kicked into this world. When he woke up, he was greeted with a lot of worried faces and found out that he had assumed another person’s identity. Turns out he’s the good-for-nothing third son of the Yue Family, who had just recently drowned himself because of a failed engagement. Unlike the third son of the Yue Family who was useless in summoning, Yue Yang succeeded in making a contract with a summoning grimoire on his first try, even when the other guy failed for the past fifteen years. Others would have a headache making contracts with beasts afterwards, but countless beasts tried to gain favour with Yue Yang instead, acting like a good kid before him.

龙腾大陆是个纯召唤的世界,无魔法无斗气。
宅男岳阳来到之后,惊讶地发现,自己变换了另一个身份,岳家三少爷,一个被美人退婚后投河自杀的淹死鬼。原来的岳家三少爷是个杯具男,是四大家族中公认最废柴的废物,用了十五年时间还无法契约召唤宝典,穿越男岳阳则不,他只需要一天……
当别人为契约战兽头疼的时候,无数的神兽圣兽却跑去拍宅男的马屁,一副‘我是合格打手’的乖巧模样。

Yue Yang the brat, however, didn’t feel grateful at all: “Scram, Mythical Beasts! Do you think you are cool like that? Go away from me now, I only like beautiful summons!”

偏偏这小子还不领情:“滚,神兽就很了不起吗?给我死开点,老子只喜欢美女召唤兽!”
 
Even when royal families approached him for his talents, the shameless brat replied, “I’m not interested in government stuff, I’m only interested in beauties!”

面对各国的争相拉拢,无耻的穿越男给出答案:“不谈国事,只谈风月!” 

外国网友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

Xbunnyxo 
 
It started out with a pretty good beginning. The premise of it was awesome; summoning grimoires and being able to capture cool monsters. But then... that nasty pervert personality is just too much. I can stand some perversion from male leads, but this character is just horrible because he has such a bad personality. I crown him, “The Worst and Dumbest Pervert Ever”.
Dude, at least hide ur intentions and be smart about it. But no, he just had to think with his d*ck all the time. Oh, this female is pretty>save her and touch her. Oh, pretty big sister here with huge boobs>touch and grope her. Wows, what a great guy, please just cut his d*ck off and make him a eunuch. Plus, the females are crazy, they’re all his little ho’s; all have the same personalities and they're tsunderes. 

开局不错,设定很棒;召唤狮鹫并能捕捉到很酷的怪物。但是,那种变态的性格实在是太过分了。我能忍受男性主角的一些反常行为,但这个主角太可怕了,因为他性格太坏了。我称他为“史上最坏最笨的变态”。
老兄,至少你要聪明一点,隐藏下你的意图,但是没有,他一直在思考问题是:哦,这只雌性真漂亮,救她,碰她。哦,漂亮的大姐姐,胸部很大,抚摸她。哇,多好的人啊,把他剪掉做个太监。另外,女人们都疯了,都是他的小弟;所有人都有相同的个性,她们的性格都是傲娇型。

rdawv 
 
It can swing to extremes between bloody revenge and lewd humor. The MC is ruthless, and yet a pervert. The title seems to focus on summons, and yet the MC himself has nearly unrivaled strength in combat. All in all, you have a contradictory setting.

主角冷酷无情,他可以在血腥复仇和GHS幽默之间摇摆到极端,但却是个变态。小说主题集中在召唤,但主角本人却有着无与伦比的战斗力。这是似乎是一个矛盾的设定。

TerraEarth 
 
It starts out sort of okay but it clearly becomes evident that this series is disappointingly mediocre.
The world/cultivation system - The author has no idea what he wants the setting of this novel to be. He constantly shifts back and forth between different systems indecisively. In the end you get this kung-fu summoner a-la coiling dragon bastardization and the way everything is bound together feels sloppy and not very well thought out. So in other words, it tries to be a jack of all trades and ends up failing to do so. What's hilarious is that summons is actually inferior to other combat systems, like the innate system, which is funny given the title of the novel. Overall it feels like something an amateur thought up when he was drunk, just throwing every drunken idea he could think of and throwing it all together to create some kind of frankenstein-like monster.

开头还不错,但不能掩饰这个小说很平庸,很让人失望。
世界/修行体系-作者自己不知道他想要什么背景。他不停地在不同的体系之间来回变换。最后你得到了这个功夫召唤龙的方式,一切表现的很马虎和没有深思熟虑。所以换句话说,他想成为全知全能者,但最终未能实现。好笑的是,召唤系统实际上不如其他战斗系统,比如天骄系统,鉴于小说的标题,这很好笑。总的来说,这感觉就像是一个业余爱好者在喝醉的时候想出来的东西,所有喝醉酒的想法都揉合在一起,创造出一个失控的怪物。

BlackHat88 
 
That's story is such a waste. I really like the magic system, the world and the power the MC gets in the beginning, I'd give it a 5/5.
But unfortunately, the MC is such a jerk that at each chapter, I'm tempted to stop reading it. He treats everyone like shit, lie pathogenicly, and kill without a second thought making his monster eat people alive.
He's arrogant like hell and sexually harass every girl with boobs big enough for his standards and he even keep a powerful monster by his side just to hit it when he gets moody. 

那个故事太糟了。我很喜欢魔术系统,主角在一开始就得到了权利,我给它打5分。
但不幸的是,主角是一个混蛋,在每一章里,我都忍不住要停止阅读。他把每个人都当屎一样对待,病态地撒谎,不假思索地杀人,让他的怪物活生生地吃人。
他傲慢得要命,对每一个胸部足够大的女孩进行性骚扰,他甚至在身边放了一个强大的怪物,只是为了在他情绪低落时攻击它。

aliyothman83 
 
It was fun at the beginning but like every other Chinese novel I have read, the MC is op af. It becomes boring after a while, as you see him having op skills, growing too much faster than others and even defeating those who have higher levels.
There is no introductions to his skills, you just know about them when he first uses them.
Ah, and we shouldn't forget the "for others it would be impossible, but for our hero it was easy" thing.

一开始很有趣,但就像我读过的其他中国小说一样,主角是天命之子。过了一段时间就变得很无聊了,因为他的作弊技巧,所以他比别人修炼快,甚至打败了那些更高水平的人。
他的技能没有介绍,只能在第一次使用的时候才知道。
啊,我们不应该忘记“对别人来说这是不可能的,但对天才来说这很容易”这句话。
 
EricBannen 
 
True : MC is perverted af, makes perverted jokes and is really nasty ?????
False: MC gets pushed around, is manipulated and is a complete douchebag
True: Harem present?
False: The harem is boring, the characters are repetitive
True: Different type of cultivation
False: Only MC is OP and his strength is limited to himself
True: Creatures are summones
False: This concept is copied

正确:主角是变态的自恋,开变态的玩笑,真的很恶心
错误:主角被推来推去,被操纵,是个十足的傻瓜
正确:后宫有吗?
错误:后宫很无聊,角色很重复
正确:不同类型的升级
错误:只有主角强大,能打败他的只有他自己
正确:生物是召唤物
错误:这个设定是模仿的

Ab991 
 
Well, it is a very very annoying novel. Too mutch useless drama and events. The author is not smart enough with his explanations and reasonings. Most the characters are females which is frustrating.

这是一本让人很烦躁的小说。太多无用的剧情。作者不够聪明,推理太烂。大多数角色都是女性,这让人恶心。

Aloo 
 
The start of the story was really good and originally I felt the series was gonna be something like Doulou dalu but with the MC using the summons. But that quickly proved to be wrong. The summons became more and more useless as the story went on. What I mean by this is that the MC became so OP that the summons were mostly not needed. I'd have rather preferred the story have been a typical Xianxia from the beginning honestly but with the title of the novel being "Long live summons" I was hoping it would more summon based.

故事的开头真的很好,最初我觉得这个系列会有点像斗罗大陆,主角用的是召唤。但这很快被证明是错误的。随着故事的继续,主角变得不需要召唤了。我希望故事从一开始就是仙侠,但小说的标题是“召唤万岁”,我希望它能更具召唤性。

ForestMT 
 
I really need to push this novel up somehow. well, let's try it.
Some people say MC get his power from nowhere.
NO! YOU ARE WRONG!

想办法把这本小说推上去。好吧,让我们试试。
有人说主角不知从哪里得到他的权力。
不!你错了!

JK 
 
LLS is a LN with superb mix of the genre present in it. You have amazing action, comedy, adventure, fantasy but the best fact is how well these genre blend in on the LN. The MC is likable and his interaction with other characters is funny especially ladies because he is a pervert but it is well presented.
Give it a try. Well most of you won't regret that

召唤万岁是一个融合了各种流派的小说。这里有动作,喜剧,冒险,幻想元素,希望能很好地融入小说。主角是可爱的,他与其他角色的互动是有趣的,尤其是女士们,因为他是一个变态,这是一个很好的介绍。
试试看。大多数人不会后悔的

worldtripper 
 
MC is similar in many ways, protects and cares for his family and friends and if you mess with them he will utterly destroy you, and has a growing Harem of the most beautiful woman in his world. Also this MC is extremely OP (although he lies and pretends to be weak for various reasons) 

主角关心和保护他的家人和朋友,如果你和他捣乱,他会彻底毁掉你,他的后宫里有一个世界上最美丽的女人。另外,这个主角是非常强力(虽然他撒谎,并假装由于各种原因软弱)

Demonic Read 
 
Fighting scene is better that so-so level. Dialogue is very boring, almost stealing from generic stories which floating in the other novel.

打斗场景比一般水平要好,对话非常枯燥,感觉像是从另一部小说中偷来的故事。

Madros 
 
It is getting worst an worst each time another girl enters the story. Due to the high number of the girls I sometimes forget some of them. This has also resulted in their low charecter develpement for the wives and no develpement for the male charectores.
The author being a big pervert has ruined this book.

每次女孩有情节进入,情况就变得糟糕。由于女孩太多,有时会忘记。这也导致了他的妻子们性格并不好,其他男性角色个性也不好。
作者是毁了这本书的大变态

berdy
 
Main Character is a jerk in an uninteresting way. Stopped reading.

主角是个无趣的混蛋,别读了。

Fatbirb 
 
Don't bother reading this unless you're looking for an extremely overpowered MC who gets tricked by almost every single person he meets, is extremely dumb (to the point of making you skip chapters) and has 0 personality.

不要费心去读这本小说了,除非你在寻找一个超级强大的主角,每一个人都被他欺骗,愚蠢的,没有个性的小说。

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