一世独尊-主角林云穿越到一个玄黄世界，一柄神秘的剑带着他纵横四海，踏破九天。外国网友热论_网文世界

The Sovereign's Ascension

一世独尊

As a lawyer back on earth, Lin Yun had never lost a case. He owed his success to three things: two blessings he received at birth (a photographic memory and the ability to comprehend anything he studies) and an indomitable will he forged himself.

作为一名地球上的律师，林云从未输过一场官司。他把自己的成功归功于三件事：记忆能力，理解能力，不屈的意志

While on a trip in Shandong province, he decided he would pay a visit to Mt. Tai. Just as he was cresting the peak, he felt a sharp pain in his chest and his vision went black.

山东旅行他决定参观泰山，登上顶峰的时，他感到胸口一阵剧痛，当即失去了意识。

Upon waking up, he found himself in the world of Profound Amber occupying the body of a sword slave who had shared his name. The last thing he remembered before dying was the image of a sword piercing his chest.Why?

一觉醒来，他穿越到一个玄黄世界，占据了一具与他同名同姓的剑奴尸体中。死前记得他只记得一把剑刺穿了他的胸膛。为什么？

外国网友评论：译者：Perter.Zhu

ReapingHunter

It's a classic take on the typical wuxia type novel, with a twist. This time it's a lawyer that inhabits the body of a sword slave. We get an intelligent main who considers his next move strategically. There is a love interest but again as wuxia goes love is usually on the side not the main focus. Also the book is fast-paced which is pretty great considering how many slow-paced novels we have. Lastly, we got a mysterious sword chained up inside of him that has a bunch of seals on it that could be a make or break for this novel on what its about.

这是一部武侠小说的经典之作，情节曲折。这是一个律师穿越到一个剑奴的身体里。这个主角非常聪明，他能认真考虑下一步战略。单女主。这本书节奏很快，考虑到我们不喜欢慢节奏的小说，这点非常棒。最后，主角的体内有一把神秘的剑，上面有一堆封印，这可能是这部小说的成败所在。

KopiCAT

He might be a lawyer but so far, it hasn't mattered any at all. He could just as easily have been a random homeless person without any work experience his whole life, and i doub he would act much different from this guy after being reincarnated. Being a lawyer, you would expect a mature and intelligent MC who plans ahead. But none of that seems to be happening. Instead he acts like an angry little boy(affected by the originals memories some commenters say). But that makes little sense, since the original killed himself. Angry people don't off themselves, depressed people do.

他是个律师，但到目前为止，这身份一点都不明显。他可以写成为一个没有任何工作经验的流浪汉，转世后他的行为会和这个人有很大的不同。作为一名律师，你会期待一个成熟和聪明的主角，但这一切似乎都没有发生。相反，他表现得像一个愤怒的小男孩（一些评论说的他原主记忆影响）。但这没什么意义，因为原著是自杀的。愤怒的人不自责，沮丧的人才自责。

LightningMizer

People are confusing the word padded filler with slow pace lol

人们把衬托和慢节奏搞混了，哈哈

knijn -

He is hiring an editor rn

他应该换一个编辑

checkm8

Couldn't agree more about the editing. It's kinda a mess right now with the awkward mixture of past and present tenses spread throughout some of the sentences which really interrupts the reading flow.

Likewise, there are some weird word choices along with the occasional just incorrect words.

Hopefully, they go back and re-edit these chapters before leaving sneak peek.

I had to stop reading after chapter 7, tried again, and couldn't make it past chapter 14.

对编辑的意见非常一致。现在有点乱，过去时态和现在时态，尴尬的混合在一些，对阅读毫无帮助。

同样也出现一些奇怪的词语，或着不正确的词语。

希望他们回重新编辑

我在第七章之后就停止了阅读，再试一次，都没能读完第十四章。

Emrys

While the story itself is not original, and let's face it after reading tons of xianxia and xuanhuan what is?, it is well executed and well paced. It is never boring and has one of the better first 50 chapters I have read in a long while. The MC is cautious and tactical and he does plan his moves. I guess my only critique is the romance part, it is cliche but I'm willing to overlook that for now and let the author further flesh it out in the next succeeding chapters.

Give it a try you may like it.

我们读了无数的仙侠和玄幻之后，这个故事本身不算开创，但它的节奏把握的很好，不枯燥，前50章我读了很长一段时间。主角是谨慎的，制定计划战术后才开始他的行动。我唯一的意见是后宫，这很烂，但我愿意忽略这一点，让作者在接下来的情节中进一步充实。

试试看，你可能会喜欢的。

knair07

I don't have a hundred words to spare .. I only have a few. Tired of waiting for the next chapter. I'm like refreshing my bookmarks page like 5-6 times every hour all day. killing me slowly with all the waiting. I ended up finishing 50 chapters within half a day. please guys. I believe that should be enough to show the story is great. fast paced. but clear. like the MC's character. author has already begun to implement main plotline related events. MC and romantic interest has an unspoken past, plus she's got her own issues. (transmigrated mc yet to figure it out), he's got some crazy sword sealed inside. still in the dark regarding details. I can feel a LC type slap maestro in the making now that he's all swag. it'll be great if it continues like this. that is if the project hasn't been dropped yet.... sorry all the waiting has already begun to brew festering thoughts.

我没有一百个字要说，只有几点。每小时刷新我的书签页面5-6次，厌倦了漫长的等待。各位老兄，这本书我在半天内完成了50章。，足以说明故事是精彩的。快节奏，逻辑性强。现在读到主角开始主要情节。主角后宫未知，他有一把疯狂的剑。细节还不清楚。我能感觉到一个无比精彩的情节在酝酿中，现在他是单身。如果再这样下去就太好了。如果这个更新还没取消的话，所有的等待都很值得。

Anji

Lol, Read other novels, bro. There are lots of novels in different websites but most of all the novels can be found on novelupdates website. Pretty interesting novels i had come across based on cooking, alchemy, musics, assasins, erotics, 21st century themes with natural abilities no wuxia or xianxia or super powers. Its pretty interesting.

哈哈，换本小说吧，兄弟。在其他网站上有很多小说，大部分小说都可以在novelupdates网站上找到。我就遇到过很多有趣的小说，比如烹饪，炼金术，音乐，刺客，GHS，超能力（不是武侠或仙侠）。

Saiyan_Slayer

Well lets go back and feel grateful about how much frustration and boring chapters author saved.

好吧，让我们回到过去，为了挽救作者的挫折和无聊的篇章而心存感激。

retired

bruh by the same account most lawyers don't have a good family because they spend all their time making money

大多数律师没有一个好家庭，因为他们把所有的时间都花在赚钱上

bobmoon42069

Thanks for the proper review, I’ll try to tank the bad translations though. The worst I’ve seen was two pages filled with nothing but symbols so this is at least readable.

谢谢你的评论，不过我会尽量把那些不好翻译删掉。我见过最糟糕的是两页除了字符，什么都没有，这里至少是可以阅读的。

Life is a Game

lord of all realms is done im planning to pick this up, but translation is bad? ive read worse, hopefuly it het fixed, nice review there. a real critic.

万界之主已经读完，打算试试这个，但翻译不太好，有些糟，希望它能修好，评论不错。

Rickn93

Damn sounds like a pretty good story that id be interested in but a bad translation can ruin a masterpiece so sounds like im not going to pick this up which is sad

该死，听起来这是一个好故事，但一个糟糕的翻译可以毁掉一部杰作，所有我不打算读这个

Hjdoogan

It's on hiatus indefinitely I think, though I heard that the author was going to continue it in 2021 so I don't really know

我想它已经停更了，我听作者说在2021年将完成它，有点迷糊。

dstroar

I read that the MC had photographic memory and the ability to comprehend anything he studies. So...... what exactly did he do to forge an indomitable will? Imo, the logic was thrown in the trash bin right there. I wouldn't read this expecting anything logical.

我读到主角有照片般的记忆力和一学就学的能力。所以，他到底做了什么来锻造不屈不挠的意志？在我看来，逻辑被扔进了垃圾箱。我读这本书不会期待任何合乎逻辑的东西。

kvngdanny

Try to please read to the latest chapter, it’s gets better

试着读下去吧，它会变得更好

Niiryu

I'm a noob at sword novels but this one caught my attention and i'm excited reading this.Give it a try!

Good to new readers of sword novels, and for novel beginners.

I read till the chapter 19 but based in what i see here, his hardwork and will to become strong seems more satisfactory than in others sword novels.
Hope u all enjoy the novel and don't forget to always cultivate the dao of swords.

我对剑类小说很喜欢，这足以引起了我的注意，读这本书让我很兴奋。试试看吧！

适合剑类小说的新读者，也适合小说初学者。

我读到第19章，他的努力和意志变得强大，比其他剑类小说更让人满意。
希望大家喜欢这部小说，别忘了修炼剑道。