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美国人模仿中国网文的写作水平如何?能饭否?

Chronicles of the Weakest Wind Mage

最弱风之法师纪事



After being killed in a random school shooting, Mia Hart reincarnated in a medieval fantasy world based on her favorite video game and vowed to achieve enough power to never suffer such a tragic fate again. Unfortunately, she has been gifted with the weakest kind of Wind Magic, Breeze Magic! As if that wasn't bad enough, her new home comes under attack by the video game's leading nation. Will Mia be able to fend for her life, or is she fated for another tragic end? 

米娅·哈特在一次校园枪击案中被杀,在她最喜欢的中世纪的幻想游戏中转生,她发誓要获得强大的力量,改写自己悲惨的命运。不幸的是,她被赋予了最弱风魔法——微风魔法!但这还不够糟,她的新家受到了游戏强大国家的攻击。米娅能养活自己吗?还是说,她注定有一个悲惨结局?





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Year 193 of the Hoplian calendar , Mia Hart ( 7 years old ).
An almost imperceptible change in the wind jolted Mia awake from hertypically light sleep , as she always cast wind magic passively even whilesleeping these days . While her magic was weak in terms of offense , its naturemade it quite suitable for scouting-related purposes such as what wasapparently happening tonight . Her [ Detection vl . 3 ] spell had notified her thatanomer huimaesence was approaching the nearby vicinityk a auick look outside her window .
There were no clocks in this worldso she wasn t sure of the exact time . but the faint light tricin from themoonlit night informed her that it must have been close to twilightun unknown figure was skulking around in the corridor outside her bedroom inthe Hart mansion .
However , their target didn't appear to be Mia s roomRather , the furtive intruder slowly took their time in front of the room adjacerthat bo normal servant of the Hart househod should have beerabe was a servanpurpose here at this timing could only bea nefarious one . With her curiosity naturaly pidceremonial sword which was basically a glorified dagger from her bedside tabpped out of bed barefoot in an effort to muffle the sound of herfootsteps as much as she possibly could.

霍普利亚日历的193年,米娅哈特(7岁)。
一缕普通人无法察觉的风让米娅从浅睡中醒来,因为这些天睡觉时,她总会毫无意识地施放风魔法。虽然她的攻击魇法很弱,但它非常适合警戒。比如今晚肯定会发生什么。她的[探测IVl.3]咒语告诉她,一个陌生人正在接近。
米娅飞快的超窗外看了一眼。这个世界上没有钟表。所以,她不确定现在是什么时候,但涓涓细流的月光会告诉她。现在一定是接近黄昏了。
那个不知名的身影在哈特卧室外的走廊里四处游荡。然而,他的目标似乎不米娅。相反,入侵者慢慢地靠近她父亲的卧室——领主的房间。
正常仆人不应该在晚上的这个时候起夜。如果他是仆人,那现在他的目的只能是邪恶的。米娅的好奇心自然而然被激起,她默默地从床头柜中拿起礼仪剑。这是一把充满着荣耀的匕首。赤脚从床上滑下来,尽可能地掩盖脚步声。
米娅顺利地从房间里溜了出来,穿上了易于行动的衣服。她有一种预感,这种行动便利的衣服会派上用场。换好衣服后,布料紧紧的贴在她皮肤上,突然让她有种不明觉厉的紧张感。不仅如此,她还随手抓了一个充满细细沙子的袋子,用处显而易见,会让敌人的眼睛短暂失明。
之后,她召唤了宠物——史莱姆,并穿上了盔甲。

 

外国网友评论:网文世界译者:Perter.Zhu


Daoist2017
 
'killed in a random school shooting'
So our MC is an american... interesting!

“死于学校枪击”
所以我们的主角是美国人。。。很有趣!
 

Icingonthecake
 
U directly assume it’s American. Hahaha. Hilariously true.

直接假设主角是美国人,哈哈。很真实。


TokenFatty
 
Could be Finnish.

可能是芬兰人。


FleetingClouds
 
I assumed it was from Greenland.

我以为主角是格陵兰岛来的。
 
 
JadeDreamer
 
I thought she was an exchange student studying there?

难道她是交换生?
 
 
attentivetentacles
 
This is so true, laughing but crying. Bro me here too!

太真实了。笑着笑着,我就哭了!


Collapsing_River
 
Japanese exchange student in America. What bad luck!

真倒霉!估计是在美国的日本交换生。


talordauna
 
Ummmm.... She's an exchange student from Japan. But yes, she was in America when she died.

呃。。是的。她是来自日本的交换生,然后死在了美国。
 
 
Yammi
 
Wow! Dude you're the best.

哇。老兄,你是最棒的。
 
 
thewayofKABOOMMMMM
 
Your dao of witty remarks is the symbol of boundlessness.
 
道的妙语是无边无际的。
 
 
TalicWolf
 
If it was a random shooting in the streets it would be rio de janeiro, yes I am Brazilian and can do that joke.

如果是街头的枪击,那肯定是里约热内卢,是的,我是巴西人,我可以讲这个笑话。
 

sixerninerfives
 
The dao of school shooting popular among American sects.

校园枪击案在美国宗派中很流行。


Reniacchi
 
Umm please don't do say that... Umm please respect all kinds of religion.

请别这样说。嗯,请尊重他们的信仰。


TheDaoOfReading
 
Okay... I apologize if anyone found that particularly offending or if that sounded disrespectful in any way. :)

好吧,如果有人觉得我冒犯了诸位,我深表歉意。


LordDarkfor
 
That is hilariously dark. Depressing too, but still hilarious given the context.

这是一部黑色喜剧。沮丧的同时,又很搞笑。


courting_death
 
Read up to 'school-shooting'
My first word:"Murica"

看到“校园枪击案”
我的第一反应是:“美国乡下人”(注:Murica = America一般是缺乏教育的美国人(农民,乡下人,共和党人,或非常爱国的人) )


Regalus
 
Welcome to 'murica y'all, get yo self some dis KFC with a side of sum FREEDOM and a large cup of DEMOCRACY

欢迎来到美国乡下,快给自己来一大桶象征自由民主的肯德基套餐。
 

Raor2048
 
So far this is one of the better girl-reincarnation trope novels. It has elements of magic, gaming, and world-building. It has set itself up for success. I will be a follower.....for now

这是一部非常出色的女孩转生小说。它包含了魔法、游戏、世界观等多种元素。它向着成功迈出了一大步。我会永远支持它。

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