龙王的女婿
Hao Ren, an ordinary university student, saved a little girl who fell from the sky. By accident, he swallowed a "candy" that fell off of that girl's body and somehow became the Dragon King's son-in-law......
His life was turned upside-down from that point on.
普通大学生郝仁救了一个从天而降的女孩。无意中，他吞下了一颗从女孩身上掉下的“糖果”，不知怎的变成了龙王的女婿。
从那时起，他的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。
ApatheticSchizoid
The MC is such a wimp he can't even choose between any of them then the author starts introducing the concept of primary and secondary wives which killed the webnovel for me.
So.I gave it 2 since the writing itself was quite pleasant to read compared to other webnovels out there, but the lackluster characters really holds it back. I just think there's way better alternatives out there.
主角是一个懦夫，他无法选择自己的妻子，然后作者引入“正妻”和“平妻”的概念，毒死我了。
因此，我给它打了2分，与其他网络小说相比，这本书还算可以，但毫无亮点的角色让人望而却步。我应该有更好的选择。
Xxddxx1
A waste of time. For a slice of life novel, characters were too annoying to be enjoyable.
浪费时间。对于一本都市小说来说，这些角色太招人烦，看的很不愉快。
浪费时间。对于一本都市小说来说，这些角色太招人烦，看的很不愉快。
Thebest
The start was pretty good but the main female lead ruins the story.
She is an arrogant, willful and she is spoiled rotten by everyone. Mc's childhood friend is a lot better than her, she is good to him and has a nice personality and has some character depth. And ins't annyoying as hell as the main female lead.
The story is that the MC is giving pedophilic vibes and is attracted to the main heroine as he finds her alluring (and don't even ask how author describes these scenes). I mean damn she is just 15 (though her mental age is below 8) and you are 19 have some self control man.
开头写的不错，主要是女主毁了故事。
女主是个傲慢、任性，被人宠坏了的人。主角小时候的朋友都比女主好，她的性格不错，描写的也有些意思。不像女主那么浮夸。
主角被女主吸引，给人的感觉像一个萝莉控，不要问作者是如何描述这些场景的。卧槽，她才15岁，智力低于8岁，而你19岁，一个有自制力的大学生。
ResidentialPsycho
The main character is a college student while the character who is presumably the female lead is a middle-schooler. Worse yet, all of the boys at the college act like they're attracted to her, and she might not even be old enough to be a teenager yet. The MC appears quite unintelligent and lacking common sense in the beginning, so I can't really see this turning into anything useful. The writing is horribly weak. I really can't see anything to like.
主角是一名大学生，而女主是一名中学生。更糟糕的是，大学的男生都被弱冠之年的她所吸引。而且，一开始主角似乎不太聪明，缺乏常识。写得太差了，我实在看不出这本小说有什么好看的。
主角是一名大学生，而女主是一名中学生。更糟糕的是，大学的男生都被弱冠之年的她所吸引。而且，一开始主角似乎不太聪明，缺乏常识。写得太差了，我实在看不出这本小说有什么好看的。
Pet93
Uhhh... this novel is bad... whoever think about reading it, don't. I want to know how it ends because I already read so far and just contemplate if I should stop and just read the last 2 chapters when it's finished... never pay for this s*** on quidan
The only likable and realsitic person in this novel was the old dragon king... all the others are tr*sh!
写的不好。建议别看。我已经看了很多章，现在想看它的结局，等它完结后，我还要考虑是否看最后两章。永远不要在起点花钱。
小说中唯一讨喜的人是老龙王。所有都是垃圾！
MonkeDanana
I forgot most of the plot but I remember having a good time reading it. It's modern cultivation but without the MC constantly offending arrogant young master.
已经忘了大部分剧情，只记得我当时看的很开心。这是现代修真，没有主角打脸“傲慢少爷”之类的。
已经忘了大部分剧情，只记得我当时看的很开心。这是现代修真，没有主角打脸“傲慢少爷”之类的。
TheTimeWaster
The pairing between main female lead and MC ruins everything good about this novel. There are many better female characters (I am rooting for the childhood friend). The main female character is a middle schooler (MC is a college student) and has the worst personality possible (a rude spoilt brat) with no redeeming qualities. And to make matters worse MC sometimes acts like a pedophile towards the main female lead.It's creepy and disgusting.
主角和女主的结合毁了整部小说。我支持主角小时候的朋友。好吧，主要是女主是个中学生，而主角是个大学生，女主的性格最差，没有弥补的空间。更糟糕的是，主角的表现像个萝莉控一般，令人恶心。
主角和女主的结合毁了整部小说。我支持主角小时候的朋友。好吧，主要是女主是个中学生，而主角是个大学生，女主的性格最差，没有弥补的空间。更糟糕的是，主角的表现像个萝莉控一般，令人恶心。
BumChikiBum
To be honest, I think this is a decent webnovel. And before you get your hopes up on this webnovel because of 'cultivation' tag in there. I have to remind & telling you that :
1. There is 'slice of life' tag in there too. The main thing of this webnovel is about the daily life of our MC, Hao Ren. And cultivation is just one of the main part of his daily life.
2. Up until now (ch.28), there is no fighting scene. So, for you who like webnovel with a lot of 'battle between cultivator' scene, I think you have to wait a bit longer.
3. Don't expect a fast plot development. IT'S A SLICE OF LIFE (at least until ch.28).
实话实说，我认为这是一本不错的小说。在你看这本“修真”小说之前，必须提醒你：
1.小说有“都市”的标签。主要讲诉的是主角郝仁的日常生活。而修真只是他日常生活的一部分。
2.到28章，还没有战斗场面。所以，对于那些喜欢“修真者战斗”的人来说，你需要再等一段时间。
3.不要期待情节很快。至少在28章之前别抱希望。
AmeME
I droped this as soon as I read the kid character being described as sexy. This is pedo bait for lolicons who are into grooming. In fact, I expect the rest of this novel to a bunch of pedo pandering. This is not the kind of content I want to see on webnovel.
当我看到，形容孩子很性感时，我弃了。这是给那些喜欢萝莉控的人写的小说，不是我想要的。
她被形容性感时，是在谈论她将来如何，而不是现在。此外，主角和未婚妻的年龄差距虽很大，但过个5-10年后，没什么大不了。有很多已婚人士的年龄差距几年，甚至更多。
仅仅是无理取闹，讨厌后宫的人没什么大不了。
当我看到，形容孩子很性感时，我弃了。这是给那些喜欢萝莉控的人写的小说，不是我想要的。
Cloux
When she is described as sexy it is talking about how she will look not how she looks at the time. Also the age gap between the the mc and his fiancee may seem big at first but in 5-10 years it wont be that big of a deal. Lots of married people have an age gap of a few years and somtimes more.
她被形容性感时，是在谈论她将来如何，而不是现在。此外，主角和未婚妻的年龄差距虽很大，但过个5-10年后，没什么大不了。有很多已婚人士的年龄差距几年，甚至更多。
AmeME
@Cloux Building a relationship with somebody underage so that you can date them when they get older is grooming, and that goes against my principals, so I stand by my review.
与未成年建立关系，你可以等她长大后，而现在的情况是违背了我的原则，所以我支持我的观点。
bob20bob2
Just a random and unreasonable Harem hater coming through no big deal.
Harem sucks- all characters are one dimensional.
仅仅是无理取闹，讨厌后宫的人没什么大不了。
但后宫确实稀烂——所有角色都没有亮点。
Sparks
Dont waste your time on this, though it starts interesting the character development is as bad as it can be. You expct that around 500 chapters with be enough to develop a character, but except the little development regarding the power of the characters, their personality hasnt changed at all and it gets annoying.
不要浪费时间，虽然开局有趣，但是剧情发展属实稀烂。举个例子，其他小说500个章节小孩都可以打酱油了。而它，除了主角有微弱的发展，其他根本没变，这就很恼火了。
qazx_mutationtypes
This story is so bad because author put pressure on MC but it's don't follow the world logic at all. There are so many force plot and to drag the story author use unreasonable logic to do it and this restriction and unreasonable demand only apply to MC.
故事很糟，因为作者把主角写崩了。有太多强制和拖拉的故事，只能用不合情理的逻辑来写，所以，主角崩了。
故事很糟，因为作者把主角写崩了。有太多强制和拖拉的故事，只能用不合情理的逻辑来写，所以，主角崩了。
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