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不知道从何时开始,小说名越来越长。譬如这本《签到千年, 瑶池女友请我出山》好看吗?

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签到千年, 瑶池女友请我出山



Gods and demons are everywhere in the Grand Desolate World.
Jiang Lan finally becomes a disciple of Kunlun Mountain; specifically—the only disciple of the Ninth Summit.
Knowing the dangers outside, he decides to stay hidden in the Ninth Summit’s Netherworld Cave and cultivate in seclusion. With a unique sign-in system unknown to everyone else, Jiang Lan acquires several divine powers, Dharma treasures, and other aids to enhance his cultivation along the way.
His current goal is to keep his actual cultivation level a secret, remain a low-key Kunlun disciple and stay out of harm’s way until he is strong enough to take on any obstacles.
Only when he emerges from his cultivation after some time does his Master bring him an important message: Kunlun has found him a fiancée.
 
大荒世界神魔遍地。成为昆仑普通弟子的江澜,只能留在第九峰看守幽冥入口。激活签到系统。
【发现大道脉络,签到获得天地造物道藏。】
【发现大道脉络,签到获得瑶池神女图】
江澜躲在昆仑签到,直到有一天瑶池女友找到了他。
昆仑即将失守。



外国书友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu


InHisName
 
Is this a joke? Where's the ambition, the urgency - emotions even! The protagonist isn't a human. He doesn't know how to think for himself, let alone what critical thinking is. You can put a human-shaped cardboard in place of the protagonist and still have story progress in the exact same way as this has been going. Nothing the protagonist does matters, even his cultivation depends on the author's mood. He will sometimes stagnate for years on end, and other times rapidly increase in cultivation with no rhyme or reason.

这是在开玩笑吗?志向和紧迫感在哪?感觉主角就是一个毫无感情的机器人。他不能独立思考,甚至可以说没有思维。随便套一个路人壳子,剧情跟原来的没什么不同。一切都无关紧要,他的修为也取决于作者的一念之间。修为有时连续多年停滞不前,有时会无缘无故的迅速增加。


TribeOfOne
 
I feel you bro. After reading these trial chapters, I feel like I just wasted 6 hours of my time.

感同身受,感觉浪费了6个多小时。


Killinq
 
I agree, all the characters are so boring. No emotion at all, the way he talks to people is like he isn't even a real person, something like a puppet or something. Everyone who he meets are either trying to kill him, saying the usual trope kinda things like mocking him or can't recognise mount tai. Or they're like his master with hardly any interaction at all. There isn't any world building either. Granted, I'm only 15 chapters in but it's so fkin boring to read.

读了15章感觉太无聊了,主角就像一个木偶一样,没什么人味。没有互动,也没有任何世界观。就好像,嗯,空空如也。遇到他的人都想杀了他,交流等于零。一些嘲笑他的比喻也很烂。尴尬癌都犯了。


gutorbit
 
The MC is apathetic and cultivates a legendary mental stabilizing sutra. If you are looking for drama and catastrophe, don't read a sign in novel because the whole point of one is that those elements are removed by the system. 

主角的感情冷漠。如果你想找乐子,建议不要看。因为这些元素都被系统删除了。


gutorbit
 
True. I don't know if the translation has reached this point yet, but he does realize rather quickly that if he isn't careful he's going to pollute his Dao with emotionlessness or apathy if he doesn't take action.

正解。我不知道主角有没有注意到,如果不改变,他麻木冷漠的感情会影响他一生的道。


NexIzich
 
Did you stop at chapter 3 or something?

看了三章,你弃了吗?


InHisName
 
This is a appalling scam. This novel was 3rd place in the voter pool!

这是一个 令人震惊的骗局。这本小说月票竟排到了第三位!


whadip
 
He's back disgusting little obedient grandson with no semblance of a connection too the modern world. He has no ambition, and pledges his life to this random master of his like a real c!nt pushover. He doesn't deserve a system. Dropping.This mc isn't worth reading about.

这是一个乖孙的故事,与现实无任何联系,真的很讨厌!主角没有大志,只是一个随波逐流的普通人。他不应该有系统的。小说不值得一读!


Hassan_Isse
 
Imagine this you get tranmigrated no cheats no ability no bloodline you join a sect and an expert wants you as a disciple you gonna refuse?

想象一下,没有能力,没有血统,没有舞弊的你加入一个门派,该门派里面的一个高手收你为弟子,你竟然拒绝了?

 
NexIzich
 
Look at their PFP, do you really think they want to think for once?

看下他的门派,你为主角想过后果吗?

 
Sword_1mmortal
 
Not worth reading!
The mc is actually useless. He progressed so fast in the first couple of days, reaching the peak of Qi refining in the first day then peak of Foundation Establishment in a few months but from my understanding they are all from the system.

不值得一读!
主角就是个废物,别看他进步的很快,几个月达到绝顶,这都是系统的功劳。

 
ShibaTatsuya786
 
Anyways, without the system, most of them would be just ordinary people.

不管怎么样,如果没有系统,他们就是一个普普通通的人。


SavageGamer
 
Yeah true but usually the authors like to hype them as some cultivation guru even though 90% of what they do is take pills.

是的,没错。作者通常喜欢把他们吹嘘成修真大师,尽管90%都是外挂。


MoreMercury76
 
Another trash sign-in system novel.
I don't know why this have such a high rating, it fxxkjng sucks. It is exactly like every other sign in novel on this platform.

又是一个签到系统类小说。
不知道为什么会有这么高的评分,小说实在太差劲了。这和其他签到系统并没什么不同。


Rakib_Hasan_0001
 
I really don’t what people find in this fucking novel.

真不想让人看见这本垃圾小说。


MarcGem
 
Try Reverend Insanity, it's the best cultivation novel on this site. Nothing ever comes close.

试试《蛊真人》,这是网上最好的修真小说。无人能及。

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