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追踪流作品——《我能追踪万物》英文版上线。外国网友:主角没有个性,与其他本小说没什么不同

I Can Track Everything

我能追踪万物



Traveling through the Xianxia world, Chen Chen got the strongest tracking system and was able to track everything ever since.
Chen Chen, “System, I am short of money.”
“Two meters away, your father has hidden some money under the bed. Five meters away, there is a rusty copper coin buried half a meter underground.”
“There is a piece of silver in the grass ahead.”
Chen Chen, “System, I need some luck.”
“The shit in front of the pigsty is actually not ordinary.”
“Go to Black Peak cliff twenty miles away to jump off the cliff.”
“Somewhere hidden there is a fairy cave mansion. Please explore by yourself.”

穿越仙侠世界,陈沉得到最强追踪系统,从此能追踪万物。
陈沉:“系统,我缺钱了。”
“两米之外,床底下藏着你爹的私房钱,五米之外,地下半米有一枚生锈的铜钱。”
“前方草丛里有掉落的碎银子。”
陈沉:“系统,我缺点机缘。”
“猪圈前那坨屎其实并不普通。”
“今夜子时前往二十里外的黑锋崖跳崖。”
“某处地方隐藏着仙人洞府,请宿主自行探索。”

外国网友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

kkgoh
 
Lame.Was supposed to be a gag-novel about a transmigrator that has a fortune-teller-radar-type system with novel exploitative applications. Instead the plot development made absolutely no sense after C100.

无力吐槽。这是穿越者的恶作剧,说的是一个能追踪万物系统,题材很新颖。但100章过后,情节归于平淡。

rhianirory 
 
The novel story is alright, pretty standard stuff as far as I can tell. Nothing really caught my attention or pulled me into the story and I remember it more for it's broken sentence structure than the story itself.

故事还不错,但就是不好看,没什么吸引力。对我来说,它句与句的描述比故事情节更糟糕。

jad14661 
 
Im reading the mtl atm and I can't say its good, but I wont say its bad either, its just kind of repetitive

天天捡钱。不能说它不好,也不能说不坏。只是有点重复了。

Master Fish 
 
Uh, I think the whole thing is very basic. Kinda weird how there are tons of treasures that nobody has found on the sect. I mean, cmon, there’s probably at least thousands of disciples walking about on a daily basis and ur telling me that nobody, even after tens of thousands of years, has found all this treasure? 

我有点好奇,为什么有那么多人没发现宝藏。我的意思是,这些门派,每天至少有数千人走动,你告诉我,几万年后,也没人找到?

TheDolphin
 
My biggest worry is the MC just being a system slave. Also not very original.

我最大的担忧是,主角会变成系统的奴隶。而且内容也不够新颖。

TheAncientOnell
 
Sht system reliant Mc's sck the bug one huge one.

这就是系统小说的缺陷。

Hnn17
 
Where was mc when I was trying to track a parcel from Russia ?Lol

当我想追踪俄罗斯的包裹时,主角在哪?哈哈

Avian_Gamer
 
I think its pretty original. The "system" isn't like other systems that I've read in other webnovels. It only allows the MC to locate something and this early on it isn't that far away so it isn't like it's OP.

很有创意。这个系统不像其他小说那样。它只允许主角定位一些东西,前期定位距离不远,所以它不是无敌文。
 
Venerable_Linfeng
 
I think it’s the system that can track everything, not the mc himself haha.

系统可以追踪一切,而不是主角自己。哈哈
 
MikeN
 
He can use it in combat against foes he wouldn't normally be able to sense. But it isn't a Passive Sense, so he's still vulnerable to surprises and ambushes if he isn't asking the right tracking questions constantly.

用系统来对抗无法感知它的敌人,这不是被动技。因此,主角如果不能正确打开追踪方式,他很容易就能受到敌人的攻击。

Introverted
 
It is better than some, worse than others; the translation is better than a raw machine translation. the use of the word fairy instead of immortal is kind of annoying i guess.

不好也不坏。某些机翻太烂了,比如“仙女”,它竟然用“不朽/神”替代。这真让人感到气愤!

SOD
 
In most chinese novels, the world 'fairy' is used more often than 'immortals' especially in xianxia themed novels so actually the translation might be pretty accurate just that it might be unacceptable in different cultures because in western countries fairy is often equated with tiny magical beings lol or beautiful women.

通常,中国小说中的“仙女”要比“不朽/神”这个词用的多,尤其是仙侠小说。在不同的文化中有不同的理解。比如西方国家,“仙女”常常形容为小型魔法生物或美丽的女人。哈哈

CarbonizedDiamond
 
@SOD  There was a strong fairy in Stephen Chow's KUNGFU HUSTLE recommend you watch it.

周星驰的《功夫》中有一个强大的仙女,建议你看看。

God_Of_Lazinesss
 
So you are tell male immortals to just go die. Just tell in which culture does males are called fairys unless it their race which is western fantasy in Eastern fantasy female immortal are called fairy. Like fairly [name] just it is in western fantasy we have goddess

所以男性神可以灭绝了,对吧。除了东方,无论男女都可以称做“仙女”。这个就像西方的“仙女”统称女神一样。
 
InHisName
 
The MC has as much personality as stale bread. The typical filial shtick with the annoying mentality of 'returning a droplet of kindness with a waterfall'. This MC has no individuality, nothing to distinguish him from the 100,000 other MCs with the exact same personality.

主角没有个性,典型的“以德报德”!烂好人的性格与其他100,000本小说,没什么不同。

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