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配角疯狂脑补,自我攻略作品——《原来我是修仙大佬》。外网评分:3.7!海外书友对迪化流的看法

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

原来我是修仙大佬



The Immortal Dao is ethereal, and Immortals are hard to find.

仙道缥缈,仙踪难觅。

Li Nianfan had descended into the cultivation world as a mortal. After learning that he has no hope in cultivation, he only wants to live a peaceful life.

李念凡以凡人之躯降临修仙世界,得知修仙无望后只想安稳度日。

However…

却不知。。。

The dog he adopts becomes a demon king of a generation when it sees his poems and paintings. It manages to suppress an entire world.

他收养的一条狗,因为看他写诗作画,成为一代妖王,镇压一方世界。

The tree he plants behind his house becomes a World Tree after listening to his zither music, forming a bridge between heaven and earth.

他屋后栽种的树木,因为听他弹琴奏曲,成为世界之树,撑起天地桥梁。

He meets a passerby who is enlightened by him and becomes an immortal sage who leads an entire generation.

他遇到的一个路人,因为受他随口点化,成为仙道圣人,引领一个时代。

When he looks back—

回首时——

It turns out that the scholar who had been pestering him for his calligraphy and paintings despite having crappy chess skills, is a chess saint from the Immortal Realm. The beautiful woman who comes to listen to his music every night is the number one saintess of the Immortal Realm

原来那位一直缠着他要字画的书生是仙界画圣,那位棋艺很烂的老头是仙界棋圣,那位每天晚上来听曲的美女是仙界第一圣女

外国书友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

Masbayu11 
 
Look, if you tell some jokes, and if is that fun, it's good.
But if you tell same jokes over and over its not funny anymore.
This novel is starting good but thats plot is repeat over and over. So, you know  why am I continue read this if the story is going to tell same story "good first start".

一个笑话讲一遍肯定好笑。
但一个笑话讲无数遍就不好笑了。
小说开头不错,之后情节越来越重复。所以,这个故事告诉我们良好的开头虽很必要,但不是无敌的。


LazySFish r
 
Started off with great potential, some of the scenes made me laugh, and I was interested in learning more about the characters.
After around 70 chapters I had to force myself to be even slightly interested in continuing.

开头很有潜力,甚至能让我发笑,让我有继续读下去的欲望。
大约70章之后,我不得不强迫自己看下去。

MyRAMEN
 
I like the story, but after coming from reading I'm really not a demon lord, the quality difference between the two subgenres of MC being an expert but they think they are normal, are noticable.

我喜欢这个故事,但在看完《我真的不是魔神》后,两个主角的差异变的越来越大。值得注意的是,主角都认为他们是正常人。

Soels
 
It starts out as an entertaining slice of life story but soon after. It became quite bland.
The MC is a perfect/overpowered guy and everybody is rushing to hug his thigh but as you read more and more, the author's writing became easily predictable.

开始很有趣,但不久后便归于平淡。
主角很完美。每个人都争先恐后的抱他的大腿,但随着剧情的深入,套路很容易被预测。

zeshan105 
 
The idea is good. In fact it is very very good. The first 50 or chapters are very entertaining. But it gets repetitive after that. The author keeps repeating the same scenarios over and over again. I am at chapter 305 and I am just tired of reading the same thing over and over again. I am dropping the novel at this point. It is such a shame though. The premise was very good.

设定很不错。事实上,它的前50非常有趣。之后就变的乏味。作者一遍又一遍地重复相同的场景。很遗憾,看到305章后我放弃了。原因是厌倦了后面的重复情节。

TheNobleReader
 
I enjoyed this.. But became redundant. The MC can't be that clueless, right? And I do not know why I disliked Daji. Maybe she's too foxy and a schemer.

我喜欢这书,但后面变的越来越冗余。主角不会那么笨吧?不知道为什么我不喜欢妲己,也许是她太狡猾了。

Daniel Potter
 
I'm gonna be honest with you, I like this novel, even though there are repetitives here and there. I especially like how the MC is oblivious to his strength and awesomeness
At this point, the MC is starting to realize his own strength, which I don't like. I would like it if he continues to be unaware of his strength until a few chapters before the novel ends, if possible.

老实说,我很喜欢,尽管它不断的重复套路。尤其是主角不知道他那无敌的力量
在这一点上,主角开始意识到自己的力量,这是我不喜欢的。如果可能,希望在结尾前都不知道自己的实力。

jon95 
 
It had potentials and the MC has a nice character but I feel the author ideas and plots were poorly executed. The characters behavior and plot are very illogical and 2d, even if I try to overlook somethings more keep popping up. 

很有潜力,主角的性格也好,但我觉得作者的想法和写作的情节不符。人物的言行与小说的情节很不符合逻辑,即使我试图忽略,但还是会不断的出现。

Toanngo 
 
The MC keep saying that "Oh this... is ordinary, its nothing" while the other immortals think of them as treasures. And this repeat multiple times throughout the novel. The translation quality is beyond bad, and the convo between characters is cringe af.

主角不停的说着:“哦,这很普通,没什么”,而其他人认为它们是宝藏。这个情节重复N次。而且翻译质量也很差,角色与角色之间的冲突不明显。

samwalski
 
its interesting but theres aloooottt of chapters dedicated just to cooking or explaining how good the food and drinks the MC makes are. Its boring. Along with the lack of romance shown.. Its meh.

虽然很有意思,但许多都是专门介绍料理,解释主角做的食物是多么多么的好,在加上没有后宫。太无聊了。

Sproutling 
 
This novel is really enjoyable at first and then it comes with same problem with all cn novel, and that's super repetitive.
Let's just say "A" suddenly found MC - MC give something to "A" - "A" found out this thing is actually a treasure but the looks are ordinary - "A" goes back and give it to "B" - "A" got scolded by "B" because he thought it A was shaming him - later B also found it was a treasure, B then told A to sucking up to him together with him. Then later the same scene occur again, with C, D, E, F, G, H and more people. And this continues for hundred chapters.
The plot? Nah, what can you expect from slice of life novel.

开始确实很有趣,后来就不行了,出现了所有中国小说不断重复的乏味套路
就像是:A突然发现主角给的东西是一件宝物,虽然外表很普通——回去给了B,被骂了一顿,认为这是A在羞辱他——后来B也发现了这其实是一件宝物,和A一起拍主角的马屁。同样的场景不断重复再现,有C、D、E、F、G、H和更多的人。持续上百章。
你说情节?没有,你根本不能从小说中得到什么启示。

Mute
 
The author made the MC a retard to keep up with the pretense of the novel, the fact he can't tell he's OP is why he is retarded, this If you read this and think the MC is anything but retarded, then i have bad news for you.

作者让主角变成了一个智障人士,事实上作者不知道自己就个智障,你可以看看这本小说,如果认为主角不是智障,那么我有个坏消息要告诉你。

iEphonixx
 
I get you might not like this type of novel but this review is unreliable, did you even read up to the chapter 30 or even 20?

我知道你不喜欢这类小说,但这个评论是不可靠的,你看了30章了吗?不,20章

Mute
 
The review was dead on, it's a low quality translation and the entire novel is a braindead MC with forced humor based on everyone misunderstanding everything.

评论都是死气沉沉的,它的翻译质量很低,主角是一个死板的主角,每个人都误解了他。

xxwiiwierdoxx
 
No, it is more of a happy, chill story to read.

不,这个故事,比起快乐更偏向于恶寒。

Austin_Fundador
 
Righ he is so stupid to the bone

好吧,他真是愚蠢到极点

HandsomeWeeb
 
I would say the MC is ignorant rather than stupid. After all, he never had any social interactions with other people after he transported to the cultivation world. And MC is a mortal before being trained by the System, so it makes sense for him to be ignorant about cultivations and cultivators.

我认为主角不是愚蠢而是无知。毕竟,他进入修真世界后,从未与其他人社交活动。而主角接受系统训练之前是凡人,所以他对修真者是一无所知的。

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