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巫界术士-带着智脑林雷穿越成一个术士,与滚开小说《巫师世界》有几乎相似的设定。外国网友评论

Warlock of the Magus World

巫界术士



When a futuristic scientist is transported into the body of a young man in a fantasy world, his curiosity and desire for power push him to pursue magic.

带着智脑穿越,成为一名贵族身份的巫师学徒,他的好奇心以及对权力的渴望促使他去追求魔法。

In a world without mercy, Leylin has no qualms about doing anything if it means benefits. He is cold, ruthless and calculating, never forming attachments that could impede his ultimate goal

在这个残酷的世界里,雷林杀伐果断,冷酷无情,从不结交任何阻碍他目标的人物。

外国书友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

New 
 
Around 800 to 1000 chapters I dropped by the third/last time. Idk how my review on this novel still gets... lost.

我读了大约800到1000章,我对这部小说的评论是:失败的

morli 
 
Like many people said, the MC isn't scientist at all! All of his scientist part come from the ridiculous OP AI chip he has in his past life that somehow got transported alongside him! And he doesn't have the mindset of scientist! The analysis, research and deduction the scientist usually have is done by his s*upidly OP AI chip! And it was done in matter of second! The MC just take what the AI chip deduce as his own without slightest doubt! Very scientific of him! No effort at all!

很多人说,主角根本不是科学家!他所有的科学知识都来自荒谬的人工智能芯片,在过去,智脑无缘无故跑到他身边!他没有科学家的思维方式!他所做的分析、研究和推论都是由高级人工智能芯片一秒钟内完成!主角把智脑演绎出来的东西当成自己的,毫无疑问!他太没主见了!废材一个!

TimMit 
 
WMW is not a novel for kids. By that I mean there no princes on white horses, a whole bunch of lucky things and so on. It is well written with logical flow given to the plot. If you are looking for SMART MC, that is the thing you must read. He is not running wild and offends everyone he sees.

巫界术士不是少儿读物。是没有白马王子,没有幸运物等等。但写得很好,情节逻辑流畅。如果你正在寻找聪明主角可以试着读一读,他没有发疯,只是经常得罪了人罢了。

Lebrew 
 
I love this novel, It has an interesting world, good pacing and a main character I really like. Yes, our main character is a homicidal, egotistical psychopath, but so is everybody else, so you might as well go with him. 

我喜欢这部小说,有趣的世界,良好的节奏和一个我非常喜欢的主角。是的,我们的主角是一个杀人犯,自私鬼,不妨带入他的视角来看这本小说。

YIN 
 
After reading around 60 chapters of this novel I can only say that this novel is majorly disappointing. The main character is claimed to be a scientist yet does not preform any action that a scientist would; rather, he simply orders his "deus ex A.I. Chip" to essentially act as google-sensei and tell him the solution to all of his problems. 

读了大约60章后,我对这部小说非常失望。主人公自称是科学家,却没有做科学家会做的事;相反,他只把他的智脑充当搜索引擎,让它解决所有问题。

Kurousagirei 
 
"Deus ex AI Chip". That's what this story should have been named. First of all somebody please tell me how this guy is considered a "scientist" when the AI chip literally does ALL his thinking and analyzing for him. He doesn't have to move a single brain cell! Is that what counts as being smart where he's from? He is little more than a body for the AI chip to act through and literally CANNOT do anything by himself if the chip were to suddenly stop working because he relies on it completely.

“智脑”。这就是这个故事的名字。当人工智能芯片为他服务思考和分析时,他怎么被认为是“科学家”的。他不需要动用一个脑细胞!他能算聪明吗?他只不过是人工智能芯片发挥作用的一个个体,如果芯片突然停止工作,完全依赖于它的主角什么也做不了。

takehisa 
 
I'm quite shocked about all those low reviews, seriously, the MC is true to his personality, some of his decision might be cold, but hey, if you put a little thought, he's just a rational and reasonable man, and using his brain all the time

对这些低评价感到很震惊,说真的,主角对他的性格很满意,他的一些决定可能很冷漠,但是如果你稍微考虑下就知道,他只是一个理性的人。

Simple As It 
 
The story was so s*upid, everything is done by A.I. Chip from his previous world, the MC doesn't appear as scientist at all, he just like ordinary person with help of OP artifact.

写的太愚蠢了,所有的事情都是由人工智能芯片来完成,主角没有一点科学家的味道,他就像一个普通人借助了作弊神器。

Kefi 
 
I had no problem with the MC not being a "white knight" kind of MC, but when he starts to be a regular evil mage, I loose all interest in his survival.

我对不是正派骑士的主角没有异议,当他开始成为一个邪恶法师时,我失去了一切兴趣。

Rvze 
 
The MC isn’t a ruthless person, but he is so f*cking heartless. He doesn’t care at all about his friend. And I am not sure about the “scientific” part. He just got an A.I. Inside his soul that the same as typical xianxia where the MC got an amazing artifact. At the beginning I enjoyed it, but lately the story become nah.

主角太过无情,一点也不在乎他的朋友,无情的像一个机器人一样。他在灵魂里得到了一个人工智能,就像仙侠一样,主角得到了一个惊人的神器。一开始我很喜欢,但越往后越垃圾。

scribbledout 
 
Great premise, really bland execution.
I REALLY wanted to like this, because I love mages and magic schools, and the premise is great. But unfortunately, everything excluding the premise is sub-par. The characters are bland, Leylin is not only boring but also lacks the superior intelligence and reasoning

设定很好,但内容平淡。我很喜欢这个设定,正如我喜欢法师和魔法学校一样。不幸的是,除了设定之外,一切都不合理。主角平淡乏味,缺乏超群的智慧和推理能力

Molenir 
 
Not a very good story. Lots of issues. Some of them may be due to translation issues, but more likely are caused by the author. As other reviewers have pointed out, the MC is not a “Scientist” No scientific method, no real experiments. Rather it’s a guy who got a magical artifact. The MC is simply a sociopath with no redeeming features or qualities. Apart from the occasional Skill Up, there is no character progression, nothing to make us invested in him, other then the fact that he is the MC. Additionally the world is so poorly constructed and thought out, and some events so poorly considered that immersion constantly breaks down as you scratch your head saying huh, what, why?!? Rather then delve and into greater detail I will simply say, there are way too many plotholes in the story. I read up to around chapter 100, and then couldn’t be bothered to read further. I simply can’t stand the MC, or this poorly written story any further

乏味的故事。有可能是翻译问题,更有可能是作者造成的。正如其他评论说的,主角不是一个“科学家”,没有科学内涵。更确切地说,一个反社会倾的人拥有一把神器,没有任何可取的特点或品质。除了偶尔的技能提升之外,对角色自身没有任何的提升,没有任何东西让我们共鸣,除了他是主角这一事实。此外,这个世界的构造和思维都很糟糕,有些事让你搔着头莫名其妙的自言自语“啊,什么,为什么?!”一点共鸣感都没有!故事中有太多的漏洞,情节匮乏。读了大约100章就放弃了。实在受不了主角,这个故事真烂

aldrinkhan 
 
World building (initial 10+) chapters kinda dull but after passing that it is a breeze. Not your typical chinese novel: no harem, no s*upid or naive MC, no bloodthirsty MC either, no revenge focus, just a pure journey to the top

起初10章让你感觉沉闷,之后你就习惯了,这不是典型的中国小说:没有后宫,主角不傻,不嗜血,没有复仇,只是一场纯粹的登顶之旅

Anonymousse 
 
When I read this novel review I imagine tony stark get blasted and died then rebirth with jarvis in his body. LoL.
But it so wrong. After I read this novel, I realize maybe tony stark isnt so bad even if hes a egomaniac at least he have conscience and morality.
The MC in this novel isnt your typical MC. Call him douche, jackass, bastard, villain, A**hole, jerk, and many more are`nt wrong.

当我读到这本小说时,我想象了下,托尼·斯塔克会被炸死,然后在贾维斯的身体里重生。哈哈哈
明显是错的。读了这本小说后,我意识到也许托尼·斯塔克不是那么坏,即使他是个自大狂,至少他有良知和道德。
这部小说中的不是你认为的主角。叫他笨蛋,蠢货,混蛋,恶棍,垃圾,等都没错。

Boon 
 
2nd edit. Downgraded from 4/5 to 3/5, now again to 1/5. Does this novel look interesting to you? Then go read "The Wizard World" which this novel poorly copies. This novel did a 1:1 copy of the main plot-lines, world, and magic systems from TWW while managing to absolutely ruin all character development and charm. In WMW every single person is a sociopath, which means that there is almost no characterization, no charming or unique characters, and a very bland and narrow cast of one dimensional villains. Go read the original before you read the second rate knockoff. PS. This novel also has the worst as*hole of an MC of all the tr*sh xianxia I've read so far. (Which is far more than most)

这本小说从4分降到3分,现在又降到1分。(注:这个外国网站用的是5分制)觉得有趣吗?那就去读这本抄袭的巫师世界。这部小说以1:1的比例复制了巫师世界的主要情节、世界和魔法系统,同时摧毁了所有角色的魅力。在这本小说里,每个人都是反社会者,这意味着没有什么迷人独特的人物可以塑造,以及一群狭隘,智障的反派阵容。在你读这本仿文小说之前请去看下原著。另这部小说是我迄今为止读过的小说中最垃圾的一部。

sordahon12 
 
I changed my mind, MC is tr*sh simple meatbag carried by op ai chip that he without would be dead in a day. I also dislike that this novel is plagiarism of The Wizard World.

主角是头脑简单的智脑携带者,如果没有它,他一天之内就会死。我也不喜欢这部小说抄袭巫师世界。

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