raifan

 

The start of the novel is boring. Doesn't grab your attention at all. What's worse, the author doesn't describe who the MC is or what he is doing. He seems to be running in the desert, so I expected him to be some type of cultivator or something, but much later it seems he was just a regular human. All you know about the MC is that he separated from some "goddess". The term was in quotes, so I wasn't even sure if the goddess was a female, statue or some spirit. Still, up to now, I am not really quite sure what his objective was in beginning. 

小说开头很无聊。根本没有吸引你读的欲望。更糟糕的是，作者没有描述主角是谁或者他在做什么。比如沙漠中奔跑，当我以为他是某个修真者什么的，但遗憾的是，他只是一个普通人。关于主角的信息你只知道，他和某个“女神”分开了。我不确定这位女神是女性、雕像还是某种精神。到目前为止，我不太确定他的目标是什么。