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妖神记-开局设定不错,随着妖灵之书重生,但后继乏力。希望作者日后能多加练习。外国网友热论

Tales of Demons and Gods

妖神记



Enmities of the past will be settled in this new lifetime. “Since I’m back, then in this lifetime, I shall become the King of the Gods that dominate everything. Let everything else tremble beneath my feet!”

过去的恩怨将在这生中解决。“既然重生,这一世我便是主宰一切的众神之王,让一切都在我脚下蛰伏颤抖吧。”

外国网友评论:译者:Perter.Zhu

Dao Of Space
 
This novel is good for starters but it was many big problems. First it's just cliche second characters are very rushed and not too interesting, like the characters didn't have a redeeming factor in rebirth of the urban immortal the MC was ruthless and he had a decent personality and most characters in it were written pretty well not perfect but well unlike tales of demon and God. Third they just focus too much on the romance aspect of the novel/manga and the worst part is it's sickening how bad it's written. 

这部小说刚开始写得不错,但有很的大问题。第一个是陈旧的套路。第二:角色非常仓促,也不太有趣,比如小说:重生之都市仙人中就没有救赎因素,因为主角是无情的。这本书里他有一个体面的人格,其中大部分的角色描述的不好,不像是写恶魔和神的故事。第三,他们过于关注小说/漫画的后宫方面,文笔糟糕的令人恶心。只能作为一本入门小说来读,没有别的了。

strixflash 
 
Looking back I now realize that I was too harsh on this novel in my review. Yes, the novel is full of cliché tropes but author is good in exciting action scenes and making bad guys feel dreaded. So if you're looking for something full of adrenaline then it's for you. This novel is not for me though due to its female characters. I could stand the repetitive plot, dumb enemies and plot holes but couldn't handle the annoying romance. The main love interest is one dimensional idiot. She has no personality at all and it makes you wonder why author wants us to give a damn about the s*upid pedophile love. All the other female love interest are idiots as well who fall for him due to s*upid reasons 

回顾剧情,意识到我对这部小说的评论太苛刻了。虽然这部小说充满了套路,作者也擅长描写动作场面和气氛。如果你在寻找一种激情的东西,那么它就是你的菜。但这部小说不适合我,因为它的女性角色太多了。我可以忍受重复的情节,愚蠢的敌人和情节漏洞,但无法处理后宫问题。这本书的爱情都是白痴。她们一点个性都没有,为什么作者要我们去管他妈的恋童癖的爱。其他的女性也是白痴,因为愚蠢的原因而爱上了主角

Promethean 
 
I don’t really know how this is really popular. Its not even a good “new game + ” type series.
And the MC is a terrible person, not to mention the writing itself.

我真的不知道这本书是怎么流行起来的。它不是一个好的系列小说。
主角是个有问题的人,更别说写作本身了。

TerraEarth
 
MC constantly feels the need to remind us of how awesome he is in comparison to everyone else and even treats the elders as if they are fools for not being as awesome as he is. People (including the protagonist) need to keep in mind that Nie Li has had many fortuitous opportunities and has had a much, much larger lifespan than just about everyone he's met in his home city, so how does he feel the need to ridicule everyone so often? It would be like a grown man being reborn as a child and jeering at another infant for not being able to do linear algebra when it's so simple for him to do so. Maybe it seems like I'm nitpicking, but this sort of thing happens far too often, in nearly every chapter in fact that it completely irritates me and takes me out of the immersive experience.

主角总是提醒我们,与其他人相比,他有多么了不起,甚至长辈没有他那么了不起,然后把他们当成傻瓜。人们当然记得聂离有很多机会,寿命也比他遇到的人长得多,那么他怎么会频繁嘲笑所有人呢?这好比一个成年人重生童年后,嘲笑另一个小孩不能做线性代数,而他自己做线性代数很简单。也许看起来我是在吹毛求疵,但这种事情发生得太频繁了,几乎每一章都有,我怒了,这根本无法代入观看!

SkyHearts 
 
It was a 4/5 when I started the series. It was the cliche strong male lead story that drawn me into it and well the fast updates. But all that stoped when it reach around chapter 110+-, don't remember specifically which.

我开始读这个的时候,这本书打分是4分。快速更新以及强力的主角吸引了我,看完110+章时,所有这些都停止了,都不知道写的什么玩意儿。

TheJudge 
 
Like most Chinese novels, they start off really well, but then gets repetitive or too biased for anyone to read or like the MC. This is one of them, I dropped this early on because the pattern was pretty obvious at that point, anymore reading and I'd be wasting my time.

像大多数中国小说一样,一开始写得非常好,后来变得重复,偏激,以至于任何人都无法阅读或喜欢主角。所以我很早就放弃了,因为当时越来越明显,再读下去,我就是在浪费青春。

DayNi

Don't waste your time.Go away!

别浪费时间。快离开!

Suijin 
 
One of the worst writing I've seen.
One of the worst plot I've seen.
The number one MC I want dead!
The writing is pathetic and keeps changing the plot every time.

我见过的最糟糕的作品之一。
我见过的最糟糕的情节之一。
我要主角死!
这篇小说很悲,每次都在改变情节。

Aziru
 
This is actually a decent novel with an OP MC who isn't so ruthless and kills everyone who offends him. There is a good motive that pushes the plot and will you keep interested.

这其实是一部不错的小说,里面没有无情的强势主角,他会杀死冒犯他的人。小说有很好的动机,用来推动情节,你感兴趣的。

sleib 
 
Great novel! High level xianxia with interesting world, cultivation, MC and other characters. It is one of the best xianxias that are being translated right now. P.S. Also unlike what review below mine says MC is not selfish,

不错的小说!高水平的仙侠,有趣的世界,主角修炼等特点。这是目前翻译最好的仙侠之一。另外,不要相信评论,主角并不自私

UnknownSaint171
 
The Main Character is far to reckless and egoistic. He has a huge ego.

主角鲁莽,自大,自负

Yolu 
 
I don't like rating bad but this story really doesn't deserves more than that.
When I read it, I thought that it was written to satisfy a 13 years old's complexes like being intelligent, praised by everyone, being loved by each and every woman (even if they are waaaaay older than you), not having to show respect to anyone. Not only that, it's really bad written. A single person point of view would have suited the book better, and I'd like to tell this person that knowledge doesn't mean intelligence. To me, he's everything except a genius.
Third point, everyone should have noticed that his amount of knowledge is fishy. Like, really fishy

我不喜欢打差评,但这个故事真的不值过多的评论。
我读到它时,我认为这本小说只是为了满足一个13岁的孩子的情结,比如聪明,受到每个人的赞扬,受到每个女人的爱(即使她们比你大),没有必要表示尊重。不仅如此,还写得很烂。我想告诉作者,知识并不意味着智慧。对我来说,除了天才,主角什么都不是。
每个人都应该注意到作者的知识量,它是可疑的。就像小学生一样,真的很可疑

khitman18 
 
I liked the story at first but it starts to drag a bit for me. There have been times that I just scrolled through the chapter. Then there’s also the issue with the MC. Very arrogant, disrespectful, even in his clan/family. No respect for the elder just because he has knowledge from being reborn and money. He casually does stuff without fear of being reprimanded, it’s not inspiring, just obnoxious at times... I kinda want to hit him myself a few times... 13yo who has the gull to walk into a 13yo bathing and when the dad catches him he still retorts back like it’s his right... then tells the dad that he’ll stomp him a year after... so what if he can? Doesn’t give him the right... I want to stomp his face instead

一开始我喜欢这个故事,现在对我来说有点拖沓。好几次我还以为是同一章。主角的问题也很多。傲慢,无礼,不尊重长辈,只因为他有重生的知识。他做事随便,不怕被训斥,这不激励人心,有时让人讨厌,我真特么想打他,主角让海鸥走进浴场,当爸爸抓住他时,仍然反驳说这是他的权利。然后告诉爸爸一年后他会踩他。这是不给他权利的事?我想砍了他

shura
 
After reading 200+ chapters I am really confused why is it the top ranked novel. Author (or maybe the translator) doesn't seem to understand what "prose" is and how it applies to a conversation and inter weaving a story

读了200多个章节后,我真的很困惑为什么它是排名第一的小说。作者似乎不明白什么是“散文”,不明白它们是如何应用于对话和故事。

uarebeautiful
 
Arrogant MC quick growth rate, well translated and relief from action by the introduction of a comic element here and there. Story flows and isn't dragged out. Recommended to all 5/5

主角成长速度很快,翻译很好和故事行动中插入了很多的喜剧元素。顺其自然,不拖拖拉拉。建议打5分

Kurokazin
 
Strong initial story, that devolves into absolute inane bullsh*t as the author gets progressively more bored with his project. Mad Snail is notorious for this and the notoriety remains justified

开始不错,随着作者的厌倦,演变成了空洞的废话。这正是导致发飙的蜗牛臭名昭著。

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