星辰变-我吃西红柿老书。有道是：“好书如酒，读之令人醉”。外国人读中国仙侠小说的真实评论

Stellar Transformation

星辰变

In a galaxy far away, there is a kid without innate ability to practice internal techniques.

一名孩童，天生无法修炼内功。

So, in order to gain the respect of his father, he resolutely chooses to follow the more difficult and painful path of practicing external techniques.

为了得到父亲的重视关注，他毅然选择了修炼痛苦艰难的外功。

As the years go by, he grows up, but what really changes his life is a mysterious meteoric crystal stone – the Meteoric Tear.

春去秋来，时光如梭，这个孩童长大了……变成了一名青年，真正改变他的命运，是一颗流星化作的神秘晶石——流星泪。

This stone fuses with the young man’s body unnoticed, and he seems to undergo drastic transformations as a result.

这颗流星泪在青年无所觉中，融入了青年的体内，青年他也仿佛破茧化蝶一般蜕变

After that, everything is changed. Eventually his father knows that the son for whom he hasn’t really shown a lot of consideration possesses astonishing abilities. And there’s a lot more to come.

而随之而来的，一切都发生了变化。而他的父亲也终于知道了他从来没有真正倾注心力的儿子的惊人实力

外国网友评论：译者：Perter.Zhu

New Gsichtselfmeter

This starts very well, but unfortunately takes the "boring route" very fast. The struggles of the MC against his fate (no dantian, abandoned by his father) get overshadowed by golden fingers quickly.. One can only have that much luck before one gets unlikable, y'know?

The worst of it is the c*ckiness. In the beginning the MC gets painted as this "smart, sympathetic and humble" kid that saves everyone and their dog out of the goodness of his heart, but very soon (after a few bullsh*t lucky encounters) all that is left is the typical third-grade brainless tyrant commonly seen in Chinese novels: "Out of my way, I have nothing to fear!" --> "Why am I in danger? The heaves are unfair!".

Especially the brainlessness of the MC hurts. I really loved to read about the smart and hard-working child.

小说开局不错，但不幸的是，“平庸路线”走得太快。主角和他的命运（没有丹田，被他父亲抛弃）很快被金手指遮住了，你知道吗，一个人有如此的运气，怎么会变得不讨人喜欢？

最糟糕的他变得自大，不可一世。一开始，主角被描绘成一个“聪明、富有同情心、谦逊”的孩子，他用善良的心拯救了所有人，但很快（几次狗屎般的幸运后），剩下的就是中国小说中常见的无脑爽文：“别挡我的路，我没什么好害怕的！”为什么我有危险？这不公平！”。

尤其是主角的无脑输出。我真的很喜欢聪明勤奋的主角啊。

ScotlandForsythe

No offense, but I’m really sick and tired of all the bad reviews. Compared all those novels with fast starts, huge revenge schemes, and s*upid tropes... I like this one way better.

It’s unique and I love the emotional scenes in the beginning (okay, maybe not emotional, but compared to other xianxia it was)

无意冒犯，我对所有负面评论感到厌倦。所以小说都有快速的开局，复仇计划，和讽刺。我喜欢这种方式。

它很独特，我喜欢一开始的情感场景（好吧，与其他仙侠相比，或许没有情感）

listy

I'm still forcing myself to read this train-wreck, because I'm a completionist.

I'll skip the plot-holes and bad writing and go straight to the last battle,

因为我是一个完美主义者，所以我强迫自己读这篇崩了的小说。

我跳过了情节漏洞和文笔差的段落，直接进入最后的战斗

justien01

Dont bother with the bad reviews below, this novel is excellent, no GENERIC revenge plot which almost all xianxia have. MC start slow but if you dont skip and just read through and feel what the authors is trying to convey about whats MC is feeling you surely get hooked.

不要为负面评论感到烦恼，这部小说很优秀，没有大众仙侠的套路，普通的复仇情节，主角升级缓慢。如果你不跳过，感受作者试图传达主角的感受，你肯定会上瘾。

Suoh95

There are certain decisions that the MC makes that was completely redundant & completely counterproductive just so the author could extend the arc. The author drags story lines out longer than its needed to be and will often reuse old enemies for no real reason except to fight the MC.

主角做出的某些决定，完全是多余的，只是为了让作者能够扩展情节。他把故事拖的更长，并且会重复使用原来的敌人，除了对抗主角外，没有任何真正意义上的理由。

Hash2cool

The MC with a morality! The plot gets more and more interesting as it progresses. The plot has a dab of love, brotherhood, power struggles and its fair share of bullies!

很有爱的主角！随着情节的发展，变得越来越有趣。这部小说包含了爱、兄弟情谊、权力之争和行侠仗义！

Vorpal

The author doesn't explain the side character's abilities and only focuses on Qin Yu, Hei Yu, and Hou Fei. Speaking of Hou Fei, Qin Yu and Hei Yu just became best friends with him magically. The character development is also very poor. Qin Yu's character basically stays the same throughout the series. The only thing that changes about him is his arrogance. This novel's plot is also extremely repetitive and gets boring pretty quickly. Power Up > Fight > Power Up > Fight

作者没有解释配角的能力，只关注秦羽、黑羽和侯费。说起侯费，秦羽和黑羽很神奇的成了他最好的朋友。性格塑造很差。秦羽的性格在整个小说中保持不变。唯一改变的是他的傲慢。这部小说的情节也极其重复，但很快变得枯燥乏味。升级 > 战斗 > 升级 > 战斗

pickles

3 stars, it is very good for a casual read.

3分，适合随意阅读。

Monkey D Luffy

Guys don't believe the bad reviews, I swear upon the honour of a xianxia readers that this series gets better and better as it moves forward. Initially when I started reading I felt it was damn slow and even had thoughts of dropping it but then didn't, let me tell you I was jubilant, never did I expect this to be a hidden gem, it's worth a read.

大家都不要相信负面评论，我以仙侠读者的荣誉起誓，这部小说随着它情节发展会越来越好。起初，当我阅读时，觉得它非常慢，甚至想把它扔掉，但后来...我从没想过这是一块隐藏的宝石，值得一读。

kedar080340119014

The LN just got translated completely. I have read the whole LN and I must say. As with all the IET novels, ST starts off strong but stumbles in the middle and completely falls apart towards the end.

看了整部小说的译文，我必须说。与所有的网络小说一样，开局很强势，中途蹒跚，最终走向崩溃。

Gellus

One of my favorites!

I see the complaints are that he is too lucky... Come on guys. What hero in any story isn't lucky?

He trained for like a million plus years (accelerated time) to finally marry the only girl he ever loved... The feels man, the feels.

我的最爱之一！

看到有人抱怨他太幸运了。来吧，伙计们。哪个故事里的英雄不走运？

他接受了超过一百万年的训练（加速时间），娶了他唯一爱的女孩。这都是男人的通病

riida

Even though the process of cultivation is described very well and is interesting to read, conflict situations with other factions are not. Enemies aren’t too smart and the protagonist is even worse at dealing with them.

While the author is good at writing fantasy elements, the strategies of characters are atrocious and the characters described as smart still act like imbeciles. I felt my braincells dying while reading.

尽管修炼的过程描述得很好，读起来也很有趣，冲突的情节并非如此。敌人不太聪明，主角更不擅长对付他们。

虽然作者擅长写奇幻文，但智慧型人物糟透了，那些被描述的聪明型人物表现的像白痴一样。我感到我的脑细胞在阅读时瞬间死亡。

Kailyria20

I find the story to be very interesting and it gets me thinking about what ifs in real life as well because of how the story is shaping out.

The main character is very determined in his goals and the finds plenty of means to reach it tho he doesn't forget about those around him. Some characters that are sometimes forgotten and shelved away in other novels show up from time to time throughout the story [for example characters from the first book], which I think is a good thing.

我发现这个故事非常有趣，它让我思考现实生活中的故事是如何形成的。

主角对自己的目标很坚定，他找到很多方法来实现目标，也他不会忘记身边的人。在其他小说中，有些人物会被遗忘搁置。在这本小说中不会，有些人物时不时的会出现（例如第一本书中的人物），我认为这是一件好事。

scribbledoutname

It doesn't SUCK but it's not exactly great either. I don't know why people recommend it so much. I highly suspect that it's because it's one of their first (if not their first) xianxias.

这不糟糕，但也不是很好。我不明白为什么人们这么推荐它。我怀疑这是他们人生中第一本阅读的仙侠小说

Zackarotto

I really enjoyed parts of this novel, but the author's bag of tricks is very limited. What's more, it has many of the same problems as Coiling Dragon (which was written after this), like giving the hero too much good fortune and no narrative tension.

我很喜欢这本小说的某些部分，但作者的技巧很有限。更重要的是，它跟《盘龙》相同的问题，比如主角有太多的好运，没有叙事的张力。

GroundForce

What can I say. This was the very first Xianxia Novel I started reading, and generally, it is THE FIRST ever Light Novel I read in general - I was a manga-only guy in the past. I must say, it was this novel that revealed the wonders of Light Novels to me.

我能说什么呢。这是我读的第一本仙侠小说，一般来说，我读的很轻松——过去我看漫画。我必须说，正是它向我揭示了轻小说的奇迹。

NaM

A Good Read Xianxia. Pretty original from IET. NO harem, Good battle scene, Good phasing.

一本好的仙侠小说。网络原创小说作品。没有后宫，良好的战斗场面，良好的定位。

lpfreek

It does not conform to logic or Science but its Xianxia. What were you expecting? Shakespeare in Chinese?

仙侠！它既不符合逻辑也不符合科学。你在期待什么？中文版的莎士比亚？

vfmolinari10

This is my first review, I wasn’t planning on my first review being a negative one, however I’ve felt really betrayed by the good reviews on this novel. They lead me to believe the bad scores were because the novel had a slow start, and “I love slow starts” I thought, but the problem wasn’t pacing, it was quality.

这是我的第一篇评论，我不打算让我的第一篇评论是负面的，这本小说的好评背叛了我。让我相信这本小说成绩不好是因为慢热，我心想：“我喜欢起慢热啊”，但问题不是节奏问题，而是质量问题。

x554466778

This series is my first xianxia read, a nice start I must say.

This one got a different feeling compared to other typical xianxias out there. No harem, but yet the romance isn't well developed.

我第一次读仙侠，必须说这是一个很好的开始。

与其他仙侠相比，这个有着不同的感觉。没有后宫，但这段恋情还没有结果。